TB fic: The Bones in Your Mouth

[nightanddaze]

Title: The Bones in Your Mouth
Author: nightanddaze
Rating: R
Pairing: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 1141
Summary: Eric learns about his teeth
Notes: Written for Porn Battle. No spoilers.

Comments

[shoshannagold]

Oh, God. That was so good! I so hope that's what it was like for Eric, because as primitive as it is, there's kind of a purity about it, too. What a wonderful way to be initiated into his new life.

Also, you make me want to watch S2 of TB, which I've been resisting.

[nightanddaze]

What a wonderful way to be initiated into his new life.

Agreed. Bloody mud sex is awesome!

Also, you make me want to watch S2 of TB, which I've been resisting.

OMG WAAATCH. TINYFACE MAKERPANTS COMMANDS YOU.

[shoshannagold]

TINYFACE MAKERPANTS COMMANDS YOU. Well. No real way to disregard an order from him, is there? *g*

[nightanddaze]

He would be so sad (and tiny!) if you didn't.

And that would also mean I couldn't try and coax you into writing me G/E :( :( :(

[nightanddaze]

Wow. *takes a deep breath* I feel like I just need to sit here for a moment and absorb all that magnificence.

Aw, thank you so much!

I love your voice in this--it's so distinct, the way things are worded, the present tense (making it so immediate, perfect for this), the way the wording is almost brusque, choppy and full of poetry.

Thank you! Writing Eric is a really refreshing change from my other voices, since there is this restraint in the short sentences and terseness.

This was gorgeous. I re-read this paragraph several times, liking it more and more every time.

I think this and the other line you pointed out are my favourites, too. Great minds?

Just everything.

And you! And thank you for such a wonderful comment!

[nightanddaze]

Have at it! The entire world needs more good GK!

[veryshortlist]

Mmmm, that was yummy.

In this line, A feeling races through Eric’s belly, like hunger but not. It spreads through his insides, creeping up his throat and filling his arms and legs. Suddenly he wants to search and find, be and feel the compliment to this feeling. I think you mean complement instead.

[nightanddaze]

Thank you, and double thank you for the typo-finding!

[amberlynne]

Mmmm. I love so very much the way you write Eric. Such a lovely mix of arrogant Viking and vamp!child. I also love how we barely see Godric but he is present in every moment. Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing. ♥

[nightanddaze]

I love so very much the way you write Eric. Such a lovely mix of arrogant Viking and vamp!child

Eric has such an interesting voice.

I also love how we barely see Godric but he is present in every moment.

Eric does not want to be without him, everrrrr. Even when he has Nate, yo.

[midiilovesyou]

Ohh, I loved this! I love Godric's quote about sex, reminiscent of Eric's earlier thought. ; ) Very very lovely.

[nightanddaze]

Thank you!