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nightanddaze October 29 2009, 14:54:37 UTC
When it’s all over, Nate’s got blood on his hands and face and no one will look at him. The man died holding onto Nate’s elbows, blood bubbling out of his mouth, his eyes on Nate’s face. He died looking surprised that Nate shot had him ( ... )

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fourfreedoms October 29 2009, 16:36:09 UTC
How are you so awesome? This is amazing.

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nightanddaze October 29 2009, 17:21:12 UTC
It takes an unbelievable amount of hard work and lies.

I'm really glad you liked!

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fourfreedoms October 29 2009, 17:59:10 UTC
Everything you touch turns to gold.

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amberlynne October 29 2009, 18:09:13 UTC
OH MY HEART! Poor poor Nate. I love how Brad knows exactly how to handle him. HOW ARE YOU AND THEM SO AMAZING?!?

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nightanddaze October 29 2009, 19:08:40 UTC
I get great prompts!

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maurheti October 29 2009, 21:19:52 UTC
Mr. Colbert, he thinks of him as Mr. Colbert...!! NGGGHHHH. Jesus, that's hot. But besides that, again I say, My heart. Oh, BOYS! Love your WWII AU stuff. It is of the awesome.

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nightanddaze October 29 2009, 22:04:35 UTC
Mr. Colbert, he thinks of him as Mr. Colbert

Polite to a fault, that boy!

:D

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prysmicdork October 30 2009, 01:10:47 UTC
My heart just hurts for Nate. This isn't Iraq, it's not his idealism that's going to die, it's his innocence, I think.(but then there is nothing new to war under the sun)

But the worst thing is, now I have to wonder what happens to them! D: (maybe Nate can be a war bride)

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nightanddaze October 30 2009, 17:02:49 UTC
it's not his idealism that's going to die, it's his innocence, I think.

Bingo. Poor baby Nate!

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fosfomifira October 30 2009, 03:08:43 UTC
Oh, Nate! You know this could break him if he's not careful, if he doesn't have someone to ease him out of his shock. Nate, in any incarnation, is the sort of person to take every flaw and every accident personally. He just doesn't know how to let go of personal resposibility or accept that sometimes you're a victim of the circumstances. He's lucky to have Brad to take care of him, in his own very low key, understated, but effective all the same way.

I didn't get a chance before to tell you how much I love this AU, but I do, very much so. I'd be lying if I didn't say I imagined porn in their future, but this is so much better. This Nate, he has so much to learn, he's much more fragile than the Nate we know.

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nightanddaze October 30 2009, 17:20:27 UTC
He just doesn't know how to let go of personal resposibility or accept that sometimes you're a victim of the circumstances.

He's so used to being helpful in Algiers, just watching the people and trying to look after everyone. After almost a year of being in the city, it's hard to imagine that something like a violent riot could happen. It's a shock, one he wasn't quite ready for.

He's lucky to have Brad to take care of him, in his own very low key, understated, but effective all the same way.

Brad, who tucks Nate into his bed and lets him sleep as long as he needs to, even if then he complains about Nate sleeping on his arm the whole night.

I didn't get a chance before to tell you how much I love this AU, but I do, very much so.

Thank you! <3!

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alethialia October 30 2009, 07:46:35 UTC
Oh, WOW.

The streets are empty now, all the rioters either hiding or arrested, and the townspeople peering behind their shutters, afraid of the blood on the cobblestones, the ghost in the air and Nate Fick the killer.

That is so VERY Nate.

When Nate turns down the right street, he can see Mr. Colbert slouched against the door of his shop in the shade of the awning. He’s smoking. His suit is the colour of storm clouds.

As usual, I remain in awe of your description. It contributes so much to the awesome mood of this.

And Brad taking care of Nate. ::hearts::

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nightanddaze October 30 2009, 17:21:24 UTC
Thank you so much! This AU is really fun to write!

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ex_trolleys November 2 2009, 00:32:11 UTC
Yayyy, you wrote more of this AU! I'm in awe of your ability to build an atmosphere and convey so much emotion in such few words. *love*

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nightanddaze November 2 2009, 00:54:52 UTC
I'm in awe of your ability to build an atmosphere and convey so much emotion in such few words

Thank you so much!1

Also, feel free to leave a prompt!

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