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night_is_fallen

NaNo Project: Chapter Five

Nov 05, 2007 12:29

Eleven Months of Night

Not quite 2000 words, fell 70 words short, actually, but that's okay. It's possible I will end up writing more today, so there's always that. Enjoy! :)

Chapter Five
January 17th, 2007

Xavier Zacharias sat in his office at the Mount Olympus Casino, pondering the events of the last month. There were definite pros and cons ( Read more... )

"eleven months of night", nano

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night_is_fallen November 6 2007, 02:04:58 UTC

:D I am working on it!

astrangerenters November 6 2007, 00:39:08 UTC

FIRST OFF OMG THAT WAS SO DIRTY AND HOT AND AWESOME YES YES YES. Not to mention that it was preceded by the best line you've written yet for this story:

"He couldn’t do his job if all he could think about was fucking his job." FRACKIN AWESOME

And on a serious note, I love the parallels between Dominique and the Demeter role in the myth. Nice!

night_is_fallen November 6 2007, 01:11:05 UTC

Dirty, yes. And probably only going to get dirtier. Jack's one of those characters that just ASKS for the dirty, you know? ;)

LOL Yeah, that line came to me just randomly and I was like "Okay, that pretty much has to go in here somewhere!" XD

I'm really really glad you noticed the parallels between Demeter and Dominique. I was wracking my brain going "Okay, how do I fit her in this and make it work, while still tying into the myth?" And that's what I came up with. I was pretty pleased with it. :)