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niftywithan

Inception Fic: Arthur-centric Prompt Fill

Aug 22, 2010 00:08

I really haven't the slightest idea why this particular fill took so long, and to be honest I'm still not completely happy with it (says the perfectionist) as I am having problems writing Arthur as the proper badass he is while still keeping to the prompt. Eh. I hope it's all right.

So my apologies to the lovely OP! I hope this is close to what you ( Read more... )

fanfic, white collar, inception

Comments 9

ihni August 22 2010, 07:20:18 UTC

That was ... great. Really really great!
I like very much how you've kinda said that "okay, so the team may not always be there for him in DREAMS, but in REAL LIFE, they will be". I also love the fact that you've made Arthur this stubborn self-sacrificing guy that he just ... seems to BE.
Loved it. Loved it a lot.

niftywithan August 22 2010, 17:38:29 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! AND YAY, YOU GOT THE POINT OF THE STORY. \o/ *throws you a Kewpie doll* I'm glad that came across the way I wanted it to. Phew!

Thanks for commenting! :D

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niftywithan August 25 2010, 00:58:48 UTC

Thank you! I figured it was poetically fitting for the entire team to come to Arthur's "rescue."

The Dream Team is the best creepy, caring family ever. ;D

elliesmeow August 27 2010, 06:35:17 UTC

Wow, each of those times Arthur was on his own were pretty awful. Glad that the last one was a total team effort(well except Yusuf), Arthur definitely needs to feel the love after all the abuse he suffered before that.

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

niftywithan August 27 2010, 16:44:18 UTC

Yeah, I figured the poor boy would need some real life lovin' after all those effed up dreams.

Thanks for reading, bb!

blamethecupcake September 3 2010, 20:32:24 UTC

Oh gosh I just love it love it love it!
Poor Arthur always getting the whoop kick, shot, and drown out of him, but I'm horrible and I love it. ;D

niftywithan September 3 2010, 21:20:27 UTC

Thanks! And it's totally okay that you're horrible and love it, because apparently I'm horrible and write it. It all works out. :D

hyuuganeji11 April 22 2011, 06:34:52 UTC

This is magnificent~!! x33333 'Specially the tidbits about how utterly AWESOME Arthur is~<3

And half naked, duh. ;) The suit works, but manmade's nothing compared to au naturel~!

niftywithan April 22 2011, 16:12:58 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it!

Ah, yes, half-naked. Of course. Matt Bomer is simply wonderful half-naked. ;D