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SuperBat Big Bang: Acts of Man [2/3]

Nov 04, 2011 11:53

Title: Acts of Man
Author Name: niftywithan
Artist Name: hitokaji
Genre: Mostly Gen, with some Slash mixed in; Action/Drama
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Dick Grayson, Lex Luthor, Alfred Pennyworth, etc.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 19,400
Warnings: Some violence and language
Summary: It all started with a circus, a fall, and a boy...
Note: Many thanks to my lovely ( Read more... )

superman, batman, dcu, fanfic, big bang

Comments 9

bradygirl_12 November 4 2011, 18:48:36 UTC

Ah, so Future Lex warned himself! Awesome! :)

Poor Dick, watching Batman fall.

I loved his reaction to being told the Secret. First he's shy, then his bubbly self. *laughs* Oh, how I love that boy! :)

Fanboying Superman right away! YES!!! ;)

niftywithan November 5 2011, 16:59:21 UTC

Yep, automatic Superman fanboy! That scene was so fun to write. :D

tmelange November 4 2011, 20:06:59 UTC

This is really an outstanding story. I almost couldn't stop reading to leave a comment!

niftywithan November 5 2011, 16:59:51 UTC

Thank you so much, that's a wonderful thing to hear! ♥

trista_zevkia November 5 2011, 05:59:24 UTC

LJ being weird, won't let me comment on third part. So to say without saying anything spoiler like, this was all kinds of excellent, a wonderful start to the big bang!

niftywithan November 5 2011, 17:00:34 UTC

Oh, LJ. You so weird.

But thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! It was a blast to write. :D

mithen November 6 2011, 07:34:33 UTC

Oh, what an awesome way to get Lex after Dick Grayson, I like it a lot!

I don't think I've ever seen someone write a fight scene with Clayface, in part because he's such a visual villain. I think you did a great job with it, it's so vivid and his voice is so in-character. I was on the edge of my seat, especially when Clark heard Dick gasp and knew what it meant.

Bruce telling Dick was wonderful! I like when he finds out on his own, but on the other hand this goes a long way toward mitigating the fact that Bruce kept it a secret, you know? You write them with so much trust between them, it's perfect.

niftywithan November 6 2011, 20:12:25 UTC

Clayface is actually one of my favorite Batman villains because he's so visual, and it was really interesting writing him - I'd never tried it before!

And I was tempted to have Dick find out on his own, but this scenario fit better with Bruce's character in this story.

Thanks for the lovely comments, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D

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niftywithan November 6 2011, 20:14:10 UTC

Clark + Dick = rainbows and sunshine and puppies, yes? ;D

(Also, please excuse me whilst I make grabby hands at your icon. They're so adorable.)