Batfic: How Far We've Come

[niftywithan]

Ughhh, I've been so unproductive lately. I badly need to get back into the habit of writing. In order to remedy that, I asked for prompts and threepiecesuits requested Robin Pizza Night, so voila!

This is nothing too special, really. Just a slice of life (ahaha - PIZZA PUN!) to get me back in the swing of Batfic. It's set in the DCnU, partially because it fit well

Comments

[airawyn]

Awww, I really like this scene. Love seeing the boys hanging out together.

[niftywithan]

Thank you! I do love writing Robin bonding time; they're such precious bros at heart. ♥

[saavikam77]

Awwwww!!! XD

I wholeheartedly approve of Robin pizza nights! :D Love the way you explained their costume changes, and gods, this just needs to happen in canon. *wistful sigh*

[niftywithan]

Ah, if only things like this happened in canon... but as long as they don't, I'll just keep writing my own reboot! That works, right?

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! :D

[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOO!!!!!!

Absolutely AWESOME!!!!!

[niftywithan]

THANKS SO MUCH! :D :D :D

[threepiecesuits]

I LOVE YOU ♥ iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou ♥ ♥ ♥

Oh, before I dive into how much I really love you though, did you mean 'peeled' instead of 'pealed' here: Dick idly pealed a slice of pepperoni off the pizza...?

ANYWAY, ohkay wow omg I love you for actually taking the time to write this because squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this is everything I've ever dreamed of and I don't even know what I was expecting, but this totally went above and beyond it and aaaaaaaaaaah so much loveeeeeeeeeeeee ♥

So ugh beginning is perfect with Dick being his chatty, charming self and then Jason being all ruffled and I don't know expecting of Dick's answers and have I told you how much I love your characterization because I really do and aaaaah everything is so spot on especially:

“Why not have him bring that nerdy little prodigy, then?” Jason asked, folding his pizza New York-style before taking a bite. “Or better yet,” he said, mouth full, “why not take the gremlin?”HOW PERFECT IS THIS OMG and TIM AND DAMIAN CAMEOS YAAAAAAAY that's all I really

[niftywithan]

(Whoops - fixed "peeled." Nice catch, thank you!)

Ohhh, bb. It's so nice to hear that you like my characterizations and dialogue, because I tend to agonize over voice and dialogue and things like that and it's such a relief to know it's all working, so thank you so much! ♥

Also: DC should just hire you to write their Batfam storylines from now on because your dialogue and everything is flawless and your costume explanations are pretty much canon now no matter what DC's planning to put out!

^ This is just about the most flattering thing ever, bb, and I want to smish you all over for being such a sweetheart, but if DC hired me to write Batfam stuff there would be nothing but fluff and bonding and schmoop and maybe some angst and I don't think that would go over very well. ;D

THANK YOU FOR LEAVING SUCH A FANTABULOUSLY DELIGHTFUL COMMENT, SUITS, AND FOR THE SUPER FUN PROMPT. I had a blast writing it, so thanks for the little push! You're wonderful! ♥ ♥ ♥

[threepiecesuits]

You are doing it all flawlessly and perfectly, worry not! ♥

Trufax though, just saying. :'3 And pshaw, I think that would go over very well! DC would have a dramatic increase in their female audience population. LOLOL

I'm so glad to hear that! I hope your other prompts have been just as motivating and fun to write as well :3

still haven't read civil war/runaway aaah moving into the dorm this weekend!

Amazing

[emersonriley]

Wonderful fic! I really loved the character interactions and... well, everything about it. Well done!

Re: Amazing

[niftywithan]

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D