me too. but when i was first writing it i was all "BUT THERE IS NO CHRISTMAS" and then i forced this into it and it didn't ~flow so well. but i kept it anyway. for the bonus features.
I love that you filled in the gaps but to tell you the truth your choices were spot on. The arc of your story works best as is. The original ending works perfectly with them both falling apart and then Cook going to him. It seems true to both their characters.
But you could of given me a deleted scene where that rep of Cook's does hit the dirt. I'd pay for that. haha
yes all of this was awesome (because that's just you and your writing, it's all awesome). but your choices of what to include and exclude were exactly right, imo.
and i like the ending that you went with better than the alt. definitely. :D
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But you could of given me a deleted scene where that rep of Cook's does hit the dirt. I'd pay for that. haha
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and i like the ending that you went with better than the alt. definitely. :D
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Neal is wonderful as always, he is my favorite. :D
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And I loooove the alternate ending. It's all kinds of perfect. :)
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