Criticize my translation, why don't you?

[niektete]

Please, pretty please. We have a translation assignment due on Tuesday and though I think I have a pretty good idea of what I'm supposed to do, I'd feel a lot better about turning it in if somebody whose native language is actually English, would proof-read it first. It's not long; barely seven paragraphs about Norwegian national costumes (they are

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[tolerik]

I'd be happy to give it a read through. My email is cerwyd@hotmail.com

[niektete]

Thanks so much! I'll email it as soon as I get home :)

[tolerik]

Hi, I emailed my comments back to you last night. Hope you got them okay :)

[niektete]

I did, and they were very helpful! Thank you so much ^^