OMG fic and OMG Twilight

[nid_niah]

Omg!! I wrote something!! And it's my first ever Twilight fic!! Oh, and, random Heroes icon on this post cause I didn't really have any Twilight ones I liked enough

Comments

[laulauz]

Your title is not as good as my title. My title rocked. It lightened the story up nicely.

But anyway, I love this. You know I love this. *still not fangirling, of course not* This makes me almost cry. Seriously. You have mad skills not unlike my mad photography skills.

Also, I think Jacob should be there. Not wolfing. Don't hurt me for not hating him. Like when Hannah said Linc wasn't hot and you hit her for like a year. Although that was really funny. Don't hit me, okay? I'll get you a nice Christmas present.

[nid_niah]

Dude, your title sucked. Funerals do not need to be lightened (only when they feel... light). But, yeah, thanks.

And you KNOW RIGHT why Jacob wasn't there. NOT my fault. And I don't hurt you for not hating him. I don't hate him ALL the time. Just most of the time.

And Linc is hot.

[laulauz]

I love that there is a GA reference there. I love it.

I do know. And it is indeed not your fault. I know right.

Tru dat.

[nid_niah]

Aight.

*shuts up now*

[feeferj]

Oh. Wow. My feedback is this-
You need to do one from Jacob's POV, Bella's (backstory obviously. Is she really dead? Did she trip over her own feet and off a bridge?), and Edward's. Seriously. It was fantastic, and I'd love to see how the other characters saw it.... and maybe I'm just trying to get you to write more.. maybe just a little. *Grin*

[nid_niah]

Thank you so much for the comment!! And that is so good of you, I really do NEED to write more... I will definitely think about doing other POVs ;)

Lol. The reason Jacob wasn't in this was... there is not reason. I actually forgot about him until I'd finished. And I was like, oh, Jacob should be there. But he wasn't, cause I sadly forgot he existed. Lmao.

Thanks again!!!

[feeferj]

But Jacob is the comic relief! Bella is the damsel/heroine, Edward is just... well, perfect, and Jacob's attempts at competing with that are funny! That's like forgetting the CLOWN at a circus. But that's ok, this was fabulous even with the clown wolf boy.

[nid_niah]

LOL! That is so true! Next time, I will not forget him, I promise. Let's just say, for the sake of this, that he was there but Charlie didn't notice him. He was... hiding, or something. Lol.

[ishtar14]

I almost cried!!!! But other than my emotional breakdown, the story was good!

[nid_niah]

Aw! I'm so sorry *comforts*

But, thank you so much for the comment!

[nid_niah]

Oh, wow, thank you!! That means so much to me!!

Thanks for the comment!

[daintress]

Very sad. Except, I have to wonder....is it all an act. Are only Charlie and Renee really grieving whilst the Cullens put on a show before returning to their house where Bella has already begun packing up Edward's things for the trip to Alaska? There is some hope. They would perform the act that well. :)

[nid_niah]

Hm, that's an interesting idea! I didn't think of it that way - like, I decided she did actually die, but maybe! There is always hope! ;) Thank you so much for the comment!!