It's really late, but

Nov 10, 2011 17:52

Okay, so I wrote this for the Halloween contest on Deviantart in the Nellis group, but I wasn't sure if I was allowed to post it anywhere else until after the judging, and then I got all caught up in classwork and stuff, and I just... never got around to posting it. XD So it's really late, but I thought I'd share it regardless!

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elphabachan November 11 2011, 17:45:27 UTC
::swoons:: EEEEEEEE! That was incredibly hot and down and dirty and ::head esplode::

I loved the beginning with Jealous!Ellis, and how it ran through the role playing and the hard and nasty sex. And you really captured the feel of El's jealousy; not really wanting to talk about it, but fretting nonetheless.

Belated or not, a very NICE Halloween fic!

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quiet_storm369 November 12 2011, 01:02:53 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed, even if it made your head esplode. XD

I see a lot of jealous!Nick, so I thought I'd write a little jealous!Ellis to balance it out. ^^ I think the reason is because Ellis doesn't really seem like a jealous person, so I had to play it off just right or it wouldn't fit his character very well. I'm so glad you think it went well, I was worried about it. ^^;

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zphal_girl87 November 11 2011, 20:04:54 UTC
You could've, it would have been cool with me, aha. I'm pretty easy-going.

Just for future referrence, because I think I'll probably run a Christmas contest next, and I'd love to see you participate. ;D

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quiet_storm369 November 12 2011, 01:06:11 UTC
I just wasn't sure, but now I'll know for next time. :D

I'd be thrilled to enter the Christmas contest when it's open. ^^ I already have some Christmas-y ideas floating around, actually.

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zphal_girl87 November 12 2011, 02:40:37 UTC
Excellent. <3

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quiet_storm369 November 12 2011, 01:17:07 UTC
:D I'm so glad you enjoyed it, it was just something of a whim and I went with it, it just seems to have worked out rather well. Officer Nick was mostly inspired by the thought that Nick probably knows his rights front and back, and the fact that I've never really seen him before...

Anyway, glad to have posted for your enjoyment. <3

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