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ninth_lady in nicksara

With Ribbons Undone

Jan 05, 2008 01:04

Title: With Ribbons Undone
Rating: G
Pairing: Nick/Sara
Prompt: #021 - Peace
Written for: prompt_palooza

( Finally... )

Comments 7

simplytoopretty January 5 2008, 00:24:59 UTC

Very sweet. I liked how you showed the gradual progression of Sara's ability to speak of her feelings. I think, given what we know about the character, that it would be a bit of a journey before she could be completely free about everything.

Good job!

ninth_lady January 5 2008, 07:59:33 UTC

Thank you so much! I also believe that it would be a journey before she could be completely free of her demons, which I try to incorporate into my stories. However, I do believe that she could get there one of these days. =)

failegaidin January 5 2008, 03:16:03 UTC

Lovely lovely :)

ninth_lady January 5 2008, 07:52:02 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

heartagram_lala January 5 2008, 04:36:55 UTC

gorjuz, beautiiful, stunning, WOW!

i love love love it.

you capture nick and sara so well.

bravo

ninth_lady January 5 2008, 08:00:27 UTC

As always, I love your praise! Thank you for reading yet another one of my fics.

and_affection January 6 2008, 19:17:56 UTC

Really great job with this. It's nice to see them relying on each other, but not totally dependent, and helping rather than supporting.