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Jan 10, 2009 20:22

Hi all! I've been in and out of the fandom, but now I'm here to stay. :) I've always loved the dynamic between Nick and Greg, but it's just been really recent that I've gotten to the point of writing fic.

Anyway, here's the first Nick/Greg fic that I've written. This was unbetaed, but I'm pretty happy with it. I hope you all like.

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g, insanegolfur

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kingzgurl January 11 2009, 02:13:50 UTC
This was sweet. Thanks for posting <3

And if you haven't had any other offers, I'd be willing to beta for you. Email me at crysbo7 (at) hotmail (dot) com.

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insanegolfur January 11 2009, 14:05:20 UTC
Awww... thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

I'll be emailing you in a little bit.

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mjswrtings January 11 2009, 03:35:04 UTC
If yo want another beta my email is my LJ user name on gmail server

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insanegolfur January 11 2009, 14:04:40 UTC
Thank you for your offer, but I've found my betas. Maybe sometime in the future.

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happy_harper13 January 11 2009, 06:06:54 UTC
A very sweet piece. Definitely lives up to short and sweet. You did a great job of capturing a tone and mood in very few words. My one suggestion would be to watch your grammar, especially when it comes to separating clauses. You use commas a bit too liberally and have a few sentences that aren't properly connected (then again, pretty much everyone on FFnet does the same thing). Overall, though, it was a very good fic, especially for a first fic. If you haven't already found a beta, I would be happy to beta for you. I have a decent deal of experience betaing and generally get fics back relatively promptly.

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insanegolfur January 11 2009, 14:02:39 UTC
Thank you so much! I've never really been strong in grammar, and I'll definitely make a conscious effort to spot those in the next one.

I would really like to have you beta for me. Would you like me to contact you through LJ or a personal email?

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happy_harper13 January 11 2009, 15:34:36 UTC
Personal email works best for me. My email address is happyharper13@gmail.com.

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