Fic: C. Bergamia (2/3), McBeck, M

[nickespix]

Title: C. Bergamia (2/3)
Author: Nicke
"co-writing" and beta: inkscribe
Pairing: Rodney McKay/Carson Beckett
Characters: Radek Zelenka, Elizabeth Weir
Rating: M
Type: Pre-slash, humour, romance, some mild h/c, friendship
Teaser: She raised her cup and Rodned caught a whiff. He startled for a moment at the scent, wondering what it reminded him of, but

Comments

[visionarioalma]

Aww, that was so great! Hooray for a fic where they don't just have sex immediately! And the English translation was much better in this part..it flowed very well. Congrats, and I can't wait to read the third bit!

[nickespix]

Thank you very much!

Hmm, well, immediate sex just didn't go with this topic/prompt. Ahem, there are other prompts for that. (; But then, this is exactly what I like about Carson and Rodney. They're such sweeties, so cute together.

Yes, translating this part was much easier... *rolls eyes* I've been told that my English was not so bad at all when I write a story - and not translate them. I hope that's true, cause I so plan a sequel to the story... *g*

Well, part three's at the beta. Which could take some time.

[visionarioalma]

Exactly! While PWP can be hott sometimes, it's the building of the relationship and the cuteness that can incur that I love! Can't wait to read the ending! :-)

[nickespix]

I so agree with you re: the building of the relationship. I love reading of the transformation of a professional co-workers relationship to friends which then transists into something more. I'm smitten with mice1900s series "moments sacred and profane". My language and storytelling skills are nowhere near to that what you can read in these stories, but I try... (;

[aclarar]

very very very nice. it felt real and oh so possible.

Hope to see the next part soon.

thanks for writing it.

[nickespix]

it felt real and oh so possible.

Thank you very much for this compliment! That was what I was aiming for.

I hope you stick with that comment when you read the last part. *g*

[sgafan33]

Green jello? I thought green jello was lime. Rodney would never eat green jello if it was lime becasue that's a citrus fruit. Maybe jello isn't flavored with real lime, but I would think he would avoid it just on principle.

I have heard of apple flavored jello. Maybe that's also green? There's a brand of hard candy called Jolly Rancher and the green candy is apple flavored.

In any case, congratulations on writing such a long fic in another language. And still not done.