Doubting Thomas by Maverick [pg]

Jan 13, 2008 23:57

Title: Doubting Thomas
Author: maverick4oz
Rating: PG
Summary: While his wife took a shine to Donald from the moment she met him, it took Senator Callahan a while longer to warm up to him.
Spoiler: A pre-movie story
Warning: Hmm, should I warn this is first person POV? Well, it is.
Author's notes: Written for round 2 of the smallfandomfest. My prompt was Donald Strachey ( Read more... )

[a]maverick4oz, [r]pg, [m]fanfiction

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merle_p January 14 2008, 08:57:47 UTC
Ah, lovely.

Callahan is a match for Donald - they both have the same brilliant obvserving skills. And both are protective of the ones they love.

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lady529 January 14 2008, 09:46:04 UTC
Love. Lovelove. Best thing to wake up to. Especially as I asked for more fic mere seconds before realising you'd posted this. You're on the party list from now on.

The Lady 529

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damerel January 14 2008, 10:50:31 UTC
This is just lovely. I particularly liked the little touches underlining the differences between the Callahan and Strachey worlds (grocery store flowers - ok, Donald may not have bought them from a grocery store had the circumstances been different, but the fact that the Senator *noticed* says it all to me), before you then show where the similarities are, which is where they really matter. Thank you for enabling me to start my day with a smile. :)

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adafrog January 14 2008, 14:13:23 UTC
Awww..beautiful. Thanks

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data785 January 14 2008, 16:21:57 UTC
I love seeing an outsider POV re: relationships! And backstory! This definitely but a smile on my face after reading this and tugged on my heart strings. Donald is just so confident and cool, <3. You did another great job in fleshing out a character we haven't met, a strong voice to Mr. Callahan, Sr.

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