[Drabble] Life will go on (NCIS)

[nicis_anatomy]

TITLE: Life will go on
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Ziva David, Tony DiNozzo (Friendship or pre-het ... that's up to you)
GENRE: General, Angst, Friendship, episode tag for 7.21 "Obsession"
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 300
SUMMARY: Gibbs and Tony aren’t the only ones having problems with rule #10. Ziva had broken it, too, and she knows how Tony must feel

Comments

[kateliciously]

Gefällt mir gut, obwohl es mehr als 100 Wörter sind. Ich musste zwar erstmal überlegen was nochmal Regel 10 war, aber mir gefällt dein Schreibstil. besonders das mit "his puffy eyes aske a silent question...". Einfach toll geschrieben. :D

[nicis_anatomy]

Danke schön ;) Freut mich, dass es Dir gefallen hat. Rule #10 lautet "Don't get personally involved with a case" Ist mal wieder eine neue.
Ja, die 100 Wörter ... die Drabble challenge erlaubt 100-500 Wörter. Ich weiß, dass Drabble 100 Wörter haben sollten, was ich früher auch immer eingehalten habe. Aber manchmal braucht man einfach ein paar Wörter mehr ;) Ich achte dann einfach nur darauf, dass ich die vollen hundert treffe und keine krumme Wortzahl habe.

[kateliciously]

Bitteschön. :D Ach, die Reihenfolge werde ich mir nie merken können, aber wozu gibt es denn google?! ;D Sag mal, wie genau sollte man deinen Text zeitlich einordnen? Vor der Folge, oder?
100 Wörter sind wirklich sehr wenig, aber das mit der runden Nummer ist ja auch cool.

[nicis_anatomy]

Eben. Google is immer gut ;) Das ist eine Szene, die am Ende der Folge spielt bzw. am nächsten Tag. Dachte ich ...

[katie087]

aww! Love! I was hoping that someone would write a Tony/Ziva interaction after this ep... because if anyone knows how he would be feeling, its her. I like that he went to Gibbs and that was a nice scene, but still... I would have preferred a Tony/Ziva scene so thanks for writing me one :D

[nicis_anatomy]

Yes, I was a bit surprised that they didn't make it a Tiva scene. I was so sure they would, since Ziva had gone through the same. Instead they send Tony into the basement. Not that I'm not happy to finally see the basement again. But still ... I think it would have worked better with Ziva.
So I had to write something. I'm glad it is what you had wished for, and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you ;)

(I need a Tiva icon *sighs*)

[nakeisha]

A really great missing scene.

Very poignant. And indeed Ziva would know how he feels.

[nicis_anatomy]

Thank you. As I just told Katie, I would have loved to see Ziva and Tony in the end of the episode instead of Gibbs. Would have made more sense. But ... well, that's our job to fix these things ;)
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[nakeisha]

I agree with you. I would rather have seen that too and it would have made much more sense.

I did get a wee idea myself for T/Z, but it's quite different; we'll see if it gets written.

[nicis_anatomy]

I'm glad you do ;)
And I'm looking forward to your drabble.
*sends coffee in case you are too tired today*

[g1rlanachr0n1sm]

This is good, like really good. What really got to me were those setences in parenthesis. Shiver worthy.

[nicis_anatomy]

Thank you very much. I have to admit that I like this style (with the parenthesis), too. I read some stories that use these a few weeks back and it's also used in some books. So I thought I should try it out. I'm glad it worked ;)

[ami_ven]

Very nice! This is exactly what this episode needed.

[nicis_anatomy]

Thank you ;) I'm glad you feel that way. I would've loved to see Ziva and Tony in the end, instead of Gibbs ...