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nicis_anatomy

[Drabble] One of them

Feb 23, 2010 18:53

TITLE: One of them
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Tobias Fornell (mention Jethro Gibbs, Jenny Shepard, Trent Kort)
GENRE: Gen, General, Episode tag (for 4.21 "Brothers in Arms")
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 300
SUMMARY: Fornell noticed that something was different at NCIS, but it took him a while to figure out what had changed ... Written for challenge #176 " ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, community: ncisdrabble100, fanart: drabble, ncis: tobias fornell

Comments 14

nakeisha February 23 2010, 11:23:39 UTC

Nicely done!

And indeed I can read the wee bit of pre-slash and the hint of Kort/Jenny.

Very Fornell. I can picture the scene so easily.

nicis_anatomy February 23 2010, 13:58:33 UTC

Thank you ;)
I'm glad I found a way to work with Fornell this week. Every other idea or episode I thought about just didn't feel right or was boring. Then I remembered him talking to Jethro while Jen met with Kort in the park, and it saved me ;)

nakeisha February 23 2010, 17:00:11 UTC

I'm glad you did too.

It worked very well.

cyad February 23 2010, 14:24:18 UTC

Ooh, loved this! Soo Tobias! Jibbs & hints of Trenny: the perfect combo, imo. ;)

nicis_anatomy February 23 2010, 14:58:44 UTC

Thank you ;) I hadn't intended to use both, Jibbs and Trenny, but I have to admit you can read it that way (and even a bit pre-slash, if you like).

cyad February 23 2010, 15:36:29 UTC

yw! :)

not a pre-slash fan but, who knows? my mind might even come 'round that. One day.

nicis_anatomy February 23 2010, 16:25:50 UTC

Oh, believe me, I'm not a fan of slash either, and it wasn't my Intention to write it. It was just ... well, it could be read like pre-slash if someone wants to read it that way.
That's all ;)

marciafan February 23 2010, 14:24:40 UTC

Oh Fornell, poor innocent Fornell lol! He has no idea what's going on, does he? And I like to immagine Jethro being very (read: VERY) jealous of the obvious chemistry between Jen and Kort *smirks*

nicis_anatomy February 23 2010, 15:01:53 UTC

Jethro jealous? Hm, I don't know, if he had noticed what was going on would even realize the chemistry between Jenny and Kort. *g* Men can be so blind sometimes (and Fornell is one of them) ...
Thank you for reading this. I felt so sorry that I had to make Jethro a minion, but then I decided it was Fornell talking/thinking and that I just should blame him for it *g*

ami_ven February 23 2010, 20:48:28 UTC

Very nice!

nicis_anatomy February 24 2010, 08:00:18 UTC

Thank you ;)

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nicis_anatomy February 24 2010, 14:10:44 UTC

Thank you ;) Yes, Fornell is a guest star I like to see every once in a while, too ...