[Fic] Breaking In, Breaking Down

[nicepantsu]

Title: Breaking In, Breaking Down
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Xanxus/Gokudera
Summary: Written for the KHR Kink Meme (rebornmeme)
Original prompt: "I'd love to see some non con Xanxus/Gokudera in front of the Millifiore VARIA, or Millifiore VARIA/Gokudera gangbang at Xanxus's orders. Premise: Tsuna is dead, and Xanxus would like

Comments

[rai_kai_lai]

W-Wow.

I was actually kind of wary about reading this but.. wow. This is just plain awesome. And I love your writing style (though you have a couple of word mistakes, i.e. 'light' instead of 'like' sort of thing.)

[nicepantsu]

AGH TYPOS. orz

Thanks. XD I'll go back and fix them! &hearts

Anyways, thanks! I don't even ship this pairing, but the prompt was intriguing. O_o I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[rai_kai_lai]

... I think you should go write what happened with the rest of the guardians during/after this event >.> /kindareallydefinitely loves your writing.

[nicepantsu]

OH SNAP I was actually thinking of doing that. But I don't want to be mean to the rest of the poor Guardians. ;_____; OH XANXUS-SAMA, DON'T HURT THE REST OF THEM. D8

Fksjdhfkjsdhf thank you. >

[nicepantsu]

WAIT WTF I TOTALLY WATCH YOU ON DA. XD

Bfkjshdk thanks. D8 I felt bad while writing it, thought because UGH POOR GOKUDERAAA. *crai*

[nicepantsu]

I KNOW, I FEEL HORRIBLE SAYING IT, but poor, tortured Gokudera is really HOT.
UGH. *feels like a horrible person* DDD8

BUT YES. SEQUEL. SOON. >8DDD IDK WHAT PAIRING TO PUT IN THERE, THOUGH. *is thinking 8059 perhaps maybeeee*

good job!

[blackmarquise]

I can't believe what I read!
I swear I was hiding my eyes behind my hands, and reading through them. It was so reaalistic. Xanxus, can be so scary sometimes, i tend to forget that (because i'm busy drooling all over him...)

i hope you'll right more of it, it's shame that it's your first khr fic, really i 'll be delighted to read more of your fic!

Re: good job!

[nicepantsu]

I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE I WROTE THAT. XD;;;
Yeah, I sometimes forget how... frightening Xanxus can be because he's JUST SO EFFING HOT. *dies*

Either way, don't worry. XD I have many the KHR fic on the way~!

[lys_cookie]

If I may, "...wine-stained teeth."

That one tiny detail made the entire thing for me.

Even thought I don't particlarly ship Xan/Goku, the Millfiore watching was awesome. It was almost like something out of Rocky Horror.

You've got a knack for this kind of thing, which (I think) is rare. Mission Completed, I dare say. xxx

[nicepantsu]

I think the anon on the kink meme meant Varia, but I just made it a generic crowd, so. XD;;;

OH MY GOSH, SOMEONE CAUGHT THAT. Thank yoooou. XD I'm glad you noticed something so small! &hearts I just thought it made the entire thing so much more... XANXUS. Because, even if he was in the mafia, he's not going to have perfectly white teeth if he drinks so much wine. :P

Heh, heh, I don't really ship Xanxus/Gokudera, either, but this prompt just sort of bit me in the ass. 8D' And thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I still can't believe I wrote it!

[lys_cookie]

OH DEAR GOD. If it's the Varia, that's even better...means Bel's there...hooooooly shiiiiiiiiiiz...

I'm a fag for minor details that are completely irrelevant and yet seem to put everything into a new context. Without that one little phrase, it would have seemed like Xanxus was just messing around. Ish. ♥ to pointless speculation.

BELIEVE IT! Narufag style. Srsly, if you can write rape, you can write anything.

[nicepantsu]

LOL THAT ICON.

YEEEESSSSS. I WISH I HAD ASKED SOONER SO I COULD'VE ADDED MORE IN ABOUT THE VARIA BEING THERE. *crai*

I am toooooo. Little details just seem to make the fic for me. &hearts And it's even better if I add something in like that AND SOMEBODY NOTICES. YOU WIN. 8Db

OLOL oh gawd. XD I AM GLAD THAT I WAS ABLE TO WRITE IT AT LEAST.

[galeaya]

WAO. O.O

I really like X59. -wipes drool-

[nicepantsu]

THAAAAANKS~!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! C: