FIC: Promises: Short Circuit (18/?) Part B

[niceandfluffy]

Part B - somewhere in Victor's head

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Comments

[inheavenlygrass]

Yay! New Chapter! I was starting to worry that there weren't going to be any new updates! Loved it! And am once again waiting in rapt anticipation for more!

[niceandfluffy]

Ah, there will be many new updates! Sadly I got caught up in things which tended to part me from my poor little laptop *sniff* - oh, and one aspect just refused to be written.

Thanks very much for reading and waiting! I'm hoping it won't take as long again... O.o

[merianmoriarty]

*bouncy bounce* hurray, fights! and Wade in pink lacy undies! XD

(one thing: Calvary is a famous hill, cavalry are the dudes on horseback who save the day)

[niceandfluffy]

For some bizarre reason, I *needed* to have Wade in sexy underwear at least in passing, and such things are hard to come by in the middle of a military base. So I'm told, anyway. I have suspicions myself..

And oh yes! Sorry about that, I've altered it - this is what comes of relying too much on the spell checker late at night after editing! *shuffle*

[hyperactivator]

Excellent.

[niceandfluffy]

Thanks! :D

[somnium_draco]

you've done exeedingly well in creating a character one can really Hate! I do hope that Caleb guy meets a particularily sticky end. Feeling very sorry for the caged tiger (Victor), you've made even the happy memories seem sad, but they also provoke some pleasing images.
on another note that has nothing to do with this, I passed by a spot in Massachusetts where Ryan Reynolds and some other actress sat outside a joke shop (they had a sticker on the sidewalk). Just thought I should put that out there :)

[niceandfluffy]

Thanks! I have a weakness for evil, sarcastic bastards who have clipboards and eyebrows of evil.. *dum dum DUM!* (whoops, apparently I have one for soundtracks too. I would have flashes of lightning but I've only just got rid of the rain..!)

It's also a very odd situation where you sit down and work out what you could use a caged Victor Creed for, and surprisingly there were many interesting answers to be had! Although I think I will avoid the little flea collar with the bell..

On the plus side, at least he'll be a genuine pain after a while ;)

Re: Joke shop bench - now that's what I would want to see if I was working in a store and looked out! I hope they were actually filming there rather than said Joke Shop smearing glue on the seat or anything O.o

[niceandfluffy]

Yes, he does have a very nasty habit of getting a little shredded in a romantic way...! An unexpected drawback of teleportation in a strange way, poor boy - not that I'm cheerful about having his clothing ripped off every five minutes in one way or other. At all. *cough*

Thanks very much indeed for reading!

[dcarradine]

Poor Victor...Those bastards dared to take advantage of his bad memory! I guess Victor will take it personally, and have some super big revenge.
I wonder what Remy was using to touch Vicky?

Seriously can't wait to see what will happen next.

[niceandfluffy]

You know what revenges are like - rub them and they just get bigger and bigger, and who am I to deny Victor a damned good rubbing? :D

I will look completely innocent over the item used for poking. Innocence is an interesting expression for me but I shall give it a go!

Hopefully the next chapter won't take so long to come out *shuffle* - thanks for reading and waiting for me!

[dcarradine]

Are you kidding? I'm the one who should say 'thanks', because I'll probably die if you don't update in a few more days -_- ///

Oh and, one thing I forgot to mention above: Hope those bastards' asses will be kicked royally for what they had done to Remy!