And So It Seemed To Confess 5/5

[nicalyse]

Title: And So It Seemed To Confess
Chapter: 5/5
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 5,100
Summary: AU He isn't worried about Rachel talking about him being in therapy at school. Nope, Puck's worried that Rachel might tell her dad what Puck used to do and Dr. Berry will get him sent back to juvie.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Comments

[shygirl593]

I Absolutely loved it :) Perfect Ending but sequel???

[nicalyse]

Probably not, but I'm so glad that you liked it! ♥

[kimmi_watch]

I can't believe this is over. I'm sad now. But I'm happy because Puck came clean not only with Rachel but with her father as well and everything worked out! Yay!

Santana's approval of their relationship made me laugh because even when she's approving of them she's still kind of offensive. Her calling Rachel short stack to try to be less mean with her nicknames and then defending the nickname with the pancake comment and that pancakes are delicious cracked me up. Such a Santana thing to do and say.

I'm really sad to see this story end because it was seriously one of my favourites, but it ended perfectly so I can't be too upset that it's over. And see, I didn't leave any unsolicited ideas based on this premise this time :) Though I am glad that when I did it gave you ideas.

Can't wait for whatever your next masterpiece will be!

[nicalyse]

So many ideas! You're like my official "what if" girl. :P

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for commenting! ♥

[likebrightness]

Maybe my favorite part of all of your writing is that any time Santana is in a story, even if it's just for one scene, she is perfectly in character. Every time. I think I notice most with her, but it's true of everyone you write, and certainly of this entire fic.

I know Nique think she has the best wife but she's wrong.

[nicalyse]

'Cause I have the best wife. ;)

Thank you, sweets. ♥

[sneaker328]

I honestly felt like someone was squeezing my heart first when Puck told Rachel's dad the truth, and then even harder when he told Rachel. In general I feel pretty confident in fanfic that Puck and Rachel will get their happy ending, but I honestly thought that maybe you'd end the story with Rachel walking away and it being more about a lesson for Puck. Serious tension and suspense there, but I'm so glad they still got their happy ending.

And that last sentence. "Walk with me." Slain. You have slayed me.

Thank you so, so much for this story. I've loved every word, and I can't wait to read it again.

[nicalyse]

This felt like a happy ending story to me, but this easily could have been one of those "and he learned a lesson" stories, like you said.

You're a darling, and thanks so much for commenting!

[lost_n_stereo]

I'm so glad you updated and so sad that it's over all at the same time! This whole story was amazing, I love that Puck referred to a romantic comedy because it had that adorable feel throughout. They really are such a good match, I wish canon was as good as this! Thank you for posting and I agree with sneaker328, "Walk with me." was the icing on the cake! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!

[nicalyse]

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!