To the Sleepless, This Is My Reply

Jan 24, 2012 17:05

Title: To the Sleepless, This Is My Reply
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: Language. Angst.
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 3,800
Summary: Post-"Yes/No" The idea of Rachel and Finn getting married makes it hard to breathe, like the air in the room just got thicker, or like there's something in his chest that's keeping his lungs from expanding when he inhales.
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character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, fanfic: puck/rachel

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curve January 24 2012, 23:19:27 UTC
Omg. This is totally my headcanon now. :3

Thank you so much for writing this.

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nicalyse January 28 2012, 18:09:37 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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sneaker328 January 25 2012, 00:44:18 UTC
I love you I love you I love you I love you.

Also? I love you.

This. Was. Perfect. Everything I've wanted. Thank you.

(I love you.)

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nicalyse January 28 2012, 18:10:17 UTC
I love you too, bb. Thank you. ♥

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uniquegrl7 January 25 2012, 01:31:54 UTC
You are amazing. This fic was love. I can't even. It's just so beautiful and heartbreaking and oh-so-canon.

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nicalyse January 28 2012, 18:10:40 UTC
Thank you so much!

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likeiluvj_d January 25 2012, 03:45:52 UTC
This was perfect, I'm going to keep this in mind when watching next week.

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nicalyse January 28 2012, 18:11:16 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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kimmi_watch January 25 2012, 03:55:22 UTC
Yay, it's the fic we were talking about!

You took that moment of Rachel singing on the show and made what could have potentially happened after it into this completely wonderful thing. Puck's reaction to the whole thing was just perfect with the way he had things he wanted to say but couldn't and the way he had his first reaction of things to say or do but consciously smothered those instints and chose a different way to go so he wouldn't upset her when she needed him to be serious. This was just perfect. Simply perfect.

(Also, the idea of Puck being almost positive that his sister wasn't looking at porn cracked me up. Like there was a small part of him that thought she could have been but it didn't bother him enough to go check. Oh Puck. Hehehe)

:)

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nicalyse January 28 2012, 18:17:55 UTC
Thank you, sweets!

(In my head, his sister is around eleven - plus she's a girl - so the chances that she's looking at porn really are slim. But he definitely can't be bothered.)

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