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nicalyse

That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 17/17

Oct 26, 2011 17:50

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 17/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 7,330
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: This is it, kittens! Thank you to everyone who read along!

( Maybe this is what people mean when they say they can feel their loved ones looking over them. )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, that the moon elbowed the stars, fanfic: puck/rachel

Comments 32

enchantedrose80 October 27 2011, 00:41:38 UTC

What a roller coaster of emotions this story has been, and I loved it.

WOnderful job, and if you feel like writing a sequel, well, I won't complain.

mvp October 27 2011, 14:34:23 UTC

I agree with this x 1,000,000,000
I loved everything about it but I really wish i could hear from them again!!

nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:45:18 UTC

I'm glad you liked the story, but I will say that the chances of a sequel are almost zero; this was their story, and it feels finished to me. ♥

nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:44:40 UTC

Thank you! The chances of a sequel are slim to none; this was their story, and it feels finished to me.

storywriter84 October 27 2011, 00:53:12 UTC

While I'm sad this story is over, I really love the ending. It's perfect. Thank you for writing this story. Seriously. I love it.

nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:45:43 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! ♥

mash85 October 27 2011, 01:29:54 UTC

Ahhhh, this was soooo good!!! This was just so well written and so well thought out. I just loved it! I love your Puck and Rachel voice. Thank you so much for this story.

nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:46:08 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it!

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nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:46:29 UTC

Thank you so much, darling!

smc_27 October 27 2011, 13:39:19 UTC

What stood out most to me in the final chapter was Rachel admitting, Noah makes her fee everything. The first half of the story (give or take) was Rachel's battle with not feeling much at all, or feeling something different than what she thought she was 'supposed' to be feeling. I loved the kind of callback to the earlier chapters.

This entire story was lovely, and yes, a lot happened to each of them, but none of it felt like too much, or unrealistic. I really loved the simple, quiet way it ended.

nicalyse October 27 2011, 22:47:49 UTC

I love that you picked that out! Thanks so much for reading, bb. ♥