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That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 10/17

Sep 27, 2011 23:45

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 10/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 7,200
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

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character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, that the moon elbowed the stars, fanfic: puck/rachel

Comments 15

shadowkitty22 September 28 2011, 06:36:50 UTC

So I'm quite positive that there were actual things in this story that I wanted to comment on but then I got up for a cup of coffee and forgot so I'll just mention the one thing that stuck out at me that I really rather enjoyed ( ... )

nicalyse October 3 2011, 17:14:36 UTC

Your thought process was the same as mine. It amused me, so I left it in. ;)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, sweets.

sneaker328 September 28 2011, 14:05:09 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you for posting this. What a relief. :) I'm so glad Rachel and Puck are now able to be in a comfortable place, and I loved the phone call while she was drunk on her birthday.

Loved the parallels with Rachel and Puck meeting their one night stand and new fuck buddy, respectively, with the bumping and the buying of the drinks. Very clever.

Mike and Rachel, eh? You just keep surprising me.

nicalyse October 3 2011, 17:15:33 UTC

I did it just for you. ;)

Mike and Rachel!

(I haven't had enough coffee today. Excuse the incoherence.)

sneaker328 October 6 2011, 23:48:25 UTC

And you know I appreciate it!

(Meanwhile, lj has stopped sending me alerts AND I had no idea I had tumblr messages from you because...I didn't even know I had an inbox because I still haven't figured out tumblr. So sorry for the delayed response!)

nicalyse October 6 2011, 23:53:31 UTC

I do. ;)

Um, boo for alert fail. And don't sweat the Tumblr thing even a teensy bit.

smc_27 September 28 2011, 19:10:04 UTC

I love Rachel in New York, and I love Puck as an architect. I thought him being all 'we're okay, right?' was perfect, because I don't think he ever would have said it if he hadn't known the answer before opening his mouth.

MIKE! Yay!

My reviews are becoming less and less coherent. Apologies.

nicalyse October 3 2011, 17:16:29 UTC

You're exactly right - he wouldn't have asked if he didn't already know. I love that about him.

MIKE CHANG! (I'm doing a little dance, which you can't see. This is probably a good thing.)

It's okay. My replies aren't terribly coherent today either.

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nicalyse October 3 2011, 17:18:48 UTC

I appreciate that so much! (I'm kind of a champion lurker myself, so I do understand, and it means a lot that you took the time to comment at all.)

Rock Hudson! I didn't even put it together until I saw this comment, but it is kind of excellent.

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nicalyse October 3 2011, 17:19:13 UTC

Thank you!

I love Mike, too. ♥