Title: My Heaven on Earth Rating: M Pairing: YeWon Characters: Yesung, Siwon, cameo!Donghae Summary: Is Yesung too far in the wild that he could never see true love?
finally, hit the laptop and I can comment on this First thing first, I do love the bathroom part, it's a combination of sensual, intense, affection, and lust... Gee... good thing you didn't end the story in the bathroom. but somehow kinda remind me of your story 'his relax night'
I do love the ending and our little donghae! Gee, I'm such a whore for YeWonHae... kekekeke... it's not overly dramatic, I guess. I just like how ys got to realize his feeling, the emptiness, the feeling of not wanting to let Sw go. Like it how sw reacts
out of topic, as you mention sugar daddy thingy, kinda remind me to a fic I read a year ago in wattpad. A sugar daddy story and somehow I keep on having the image of Yesung and Siwon as I read the story. They somehow fit the story
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First thing first, I do love the bathroom part, it's a combination of sensual, intense, affection, and lust... Gee... good thing you didn't end the story in the bathroom.
but somehow kinda remind me of your story 'his relax night'
I do love the ending and our little donghae! Gee, I'm such a whore for YeWonHae... kekekeke...
it's not overly dramatic, I guess. I just like how ys got to realize his feeling, the emptiness, the feeling of not wanting to let Sw go. Like it how sw reacts
out of topic, as you mention sugar daddy thingy, kinda remind me to a fic I read a year ago in wattpad. A sugar daddy story and somehow I keep on having the image of Yesung and Siwon as I read the story. They somehow fit the story
love your works, dear and happy new year :*
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