I think you have outdone yourself with this one, my dear, because what you've created here is nothing short of amazing.
What I love most about this fic is that it truly is a character study. You've nailed Alan, Ed and Sam, and shown all their nuances and complexities. I loved Alan's insight and conversation with Sam- for all his skill as a Master, it is that apology to Sam and his willingess to change what truly makes Alan great.
You added another level of depth to Sam's behaviour and ED- well, what can I say about him? He's *perfect* being a little shit and I thoroughly enjoyed Alan taking him down a notch *evil G*
Oh, and the ending had me sighing in a fuzzy happiness, but don't tell anybody, because I have a reputation to keep.
Well done!! :))))
PS. I want to know more about that story you've invented for the picture!
Awww, thanks! I actually wrote most of this story months ago (how long ago was it that you wrote the second part of this series?) and came back and finished the naughty bit just recently. It's good that it was worth the wait.
I thoroughly enjoyed Alan taking him down a notch
I don't know where that came from, but it just seemed right. Ed was getting a little too cocky for his own good. ;)
I had to write a snuggle pile, I just had to, and I'm glad you approve even if I can't tell anybody. :D
There isn't much to my little story; pretty much just what I already said. Maybe someday I'll make more of it... though I thought you had a little story of your own and were maybe going to write a prequel? :D
I thought you had a little story of your own and were maybe going to write a prequel?
Emm... I'm actually struggling to finish an Alan/Ed fic *cough*watersports warning*cough* but I very much like the idea of exploring that possible prequel... Soon I hope! ;)
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What I love most about this fic is that it truly is a character study. You've nailed Alan, Ed and Sam, and shown all their nuances and complexities. I loved Alan's insight and conversation with Sam- for all his skill as a Master, it is that apology to Sam and his willingess to change what truly makes Alan great.
You added another level of depth to Sam's behaviour and ED- well, what can I say about him? He's *perfect* being a little shit and I thoroughly enjoyed Alan taking him down a notch *evil G*
Oh, and the ending had me sighing in a fuzzy happiness, but don't tell anybody, because I have a reputation to keep.
Well done!! :))))
PS. I want to know more about that story you've invented for the picture!
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I thoroughly enjoyed Alan taking him down a notch
I don't know where that came from, but it just seemed right. Ed was getting a little too cocky for his own good. ;)
I had to write a snuggle pile, I just had to, and I'm glad you approve even if I can't tell anybody. :D
There isn't much to my little story; pretty much just what I already said. Maybe someday I'll make more of it... though I thought you had a little story of your own and were maybe going to write a prequel? :D
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Emm... I'm actually struggling to finish an Alan/Ed fic *cough*watersports warning*cough* but I very much like the idea of exploring that possible prequel... Soon I hope! ;)
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