[Fic] Temptations

[nezumiko]

Title: Temptations
Author: Nezuko
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rating: K+
Characters: Hayate, Yuugao
Status: Complete, Worksafe
Wordcount: 759
Link: On FanFiction.net Temptations

Summary: Hayate has faced many temptations in his life, and learned from his mistakes. Getting involved with his subordinate Yuugao, he can tell, would be a bad, bad idea

Comments

[drelfina]

It's... so sad. and not. at the same time. Poorhayate.

But he's not going to have dire consequences from it, right? THe... intuition and teammate one, and the poison and his telling Aiko's secret was... the saddest parts, I think .

It's beautiful.

[nezumiko]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Dire consequences aren't always as dire as they might appear to be at first...

And yeah, I can't even write a happy romantic story without it being bittersweet, can I?

[drelfina]

That is being mean to Hayate.

Poor Hayate, never gets fluff.

Not like Ninja CAN have fluff. It's like, Assassins who kill for money being fluffy.

[beachlass]

I think the line we were discussing last night from Merchant of Venice fits this perfectly. Hayate's thinking with his head, and yet his heart overtakes him.

Lovely story. I liked the bittersweetness of his learning mistakes.

[nezumiko]

Thanks. You're right, this is a fitting story for that quote.

I'm glad you liked it. Learning is never easy, it seems.

[nezumiko]

Also, that is a disturbing icon.

[beachlass]

Disturbing? It's a drinking coffee in a shirt and underwear icon.

I could keep my underwear icons to myself, then, if you like.