LoM Fic: Falling Apart - Part Two, Sam/Gene, Green Cortina

[neyah444]

FALLING APART: Part Two

Sam arrived home in the middle of the night, tired, just wanting to sleep and forget. He switched the TV on but there was nothing just that test card girl with her clown on it. So Sam decided to take a shower and go to bed as soon as possible, because in the morning he would have some important things to do.

When he stepped

Comments

[dorsetgirl]

Wow, what an amazing ending; I wasn't expecting that at all. This is a great story - I was sitting here willing Sam to accept Gene's kiss! What a very silly boy he is.

I'm really intrigued to know what happens next, and I'm trying to work out the significance of the date!

*waits for next chapter*

[neyah444]

Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Sam's a silly boy, but he has his reasons and he's always a bit depressed. The next chapter comes tomorrow and maybe it's not that good, but I promise you a quite fluffy ending.:D
Thanks for the great comment! I know now that at least one person liked it, so the rest is absolutly worth to post.

[ladyhawke2]

I wrote a reply to this but it disappeared into the ether :( I also enjoyed reading your fic, and please do post the next part as I'd like to find out what happens? I was surprised that Sam got on the bus, and surprised by Birmingham at the end, it was very surreal. A shame he has to go back... ;)

[neyah444]

I'm sorry it disappeared, but thank you for sending it again. This is my first fic, and it's mainly about the things that bothered me the most about the ending of the series. I just wish I'd speak english better, but I think practice makes perfect. That surreal vision of Birmingham gave me the idea to write a sequel. I'm glad it worked for you and I hope you'll enjoy the next part too (though I think that part is the weakest link).

[hyarrowen]

Wow, that last paragraph really is a shock.