FIC: Hello, Apology - Scorpius/Lysander

Dec 22, 2011 10:24

Title: Hello, Apology
Creator: herbeautifullie
Prompt Number: #8
Rating: Teen
Pairing/characters: Scorpius Malfoy / Lysander Scamader, Scorpius Malfoy / James S. Potter (mentioned).
Warnings/content: Highlight to read *Infidelity*
Medium or word count: 2, 800-ish.
Summary: When you step in to your shoes, pull together the clasps of your cloak and glance around the ( Read more... )

fic: pairing: scorpius/lysander, fic: length: 1-5k, *2011

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nerak_rose December 22 2011, 08:50:29 UTC
Oh, Scorpius, you silly thing. I'm holding out for Lysander forgiving him. <3 I think after three months of torment he might have been punished enough. Maybe. :P
Btw, the 2nd person POV works really great here. It gave the entire piece a sense of intimacy.

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alley_skywalker December 22 2011, 15:36:33 UTC
Aww! Thank you for writing this <3 I think you did both Lysander and Scorpius justice as well as their relationship. This story is very sweet and well-written.

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mssekishi December 22 2011, 16:01:53 UTC
It's beautifully written in the 2nd person POV and i'll never get tired of reading this (;

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herbeautifullie January 5 2012, 22:26:00 UTC
Thank you, Ms. Seki! ♥

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mozarts_piano December 22 2011, 23:15:53 UTC
Wow. Wow. I really enjoyed this one! Lysander was so wonderfully portrayed - even if we don't see too much of him, only through Scorpius. What a lovely set-up!
Diagon had a fantastic mood about it, Lorcan's brief appearance was interesting, and I really loved the open ending :)
Such a pretty story!

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herbeautifullie January 5 2012, 22:28:23 UTC
Lysander was one thing I really worried because I didn't want him to fall flat but I didn't want him to be the centre either. Thank you for taking the time to read it! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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charmed310 December 23 2011, 03:40:42 UTC
Heart wrenching agony!

The ending was particularly excellent.

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