[Fic] The One Prophecy - Chapter 1

[newssuki]

Nakamaru rustled through the guidebook for information on the ones that were open to the public, leaving his best friend tugging out the luggage from the taxi and paid the fare. “So any luck?” Tatsuya asked, squishing nearer to his best friend and looking at the opened page.

“I think we better sneak up to the hotel first. After lunch, we can explore

Comments

[twentysvn]

it's interesting..
thx for the update!
keep it going
i like the way you used 'hearing voices' in a crowded and noisy situation like this, give a different feeling

[newssuki]

w-well that sound mysterious but just following the chapters and you'll know *wicked grin*

[oxokawaiiox]

Just finished prologue & this chapter, its really great!!
it's so interesting !! gosh i wonder what will happen to Ueda ..
hopefully he's okay lol. And could Ryo be a vampire *gasps* ahh this is soo good, please continue with this awesomeness fic<3

thanks for sharing, waiting for next update ^^

[newssuki]

um I won't say anything.
No spoiler this time *winks*

[snow_meow]

This is interesting.

I wonder is the "dark" one Ryo or Kame.

I am curious about the last bit of the prophecy... "..The One shall hold you firmly for he had given his heart to you but you might not fated as his Queen." Does this mean Ueda is not meant to be his "One"?

[newssuki]

hmm Ryo? Kame? Nakamaru? everyone can be...
just wait and see.. ^^

[raixas]

waah~!
what happen after that??
i'm curious~
i'll be looking forward to the next chap!
thank you for sharing!^^

[newssuki]

*nodding* yes u're going to be more curious after this.
just keep with my pace. u'll know the answer soon.

[hanny2luv]

Waaiiii....Can't wait for the next chapter.
It's getting really interesting.

Thanks for the update.

[newssuki]

thehehe.. already posted.
why am i so eager writing this XDDD