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fic for peroxidepest17

Sep 01, 2010 19:44

Gift fic for: peroxidepest17
From: newsficcon

Title: Twelve Heads Are Better Than Six
Rating: PG
Pairing: NEWS whole-group gen fic
Summary: NEWS accidentally time travel to 2013 to find their group falling apart and their future selves at each other’s throats.
Notes: This was meant to be crack, but it came out more serious than I’d intended. It’s not sad, but ( Read more... )

c: koyama, c: yamapi, c: massu, c: shige, c: ryo, p: none; genfic, r: pg, c: tegoshi

Comments 24

speckled_writer September 3 2010, 12:57:32 UTC

This is one of those fics that leaves me with a silly smile on my face. I love it. :D

budiamond September 13 2010, 09:24:31 UTC

Yay, thank you! I'm glad you got a smile out of it. :D
♥

sashjun September 3 2010, 14:09:11 UTC

AHAHAH this was perfect. so spot on <3

all the interactions between present and future news. I´m amazed how well it worked when the same person from two timelines interacted with ?itself?. that was really cool and pulled off perfectly.

Future Tegoshi looked absolutely delighted to see all of NEWS standing outside his door when he came to let in whoever was knocking, and it took him a few moments to realise that there were a couple of extras tagging along. I laughed out loud. so much.

Shige trying to get rid of Tegoshi´s freckles <3 And omg Future Ryo being possessive of "his" Tegoshi and overall the two of them reasoning with each other was great. As was past Shige - future Koyama scene. That was precious. Massu withdrawing made me so sad ( ... )

budiamond September 13 2010, 09:28:07 UTC

Thank you very much! :D
I'm glad the interactions worked out well, for you at least, because my beta reader got really confused at some points. XD But we worked it out mostly.

The past Shige - future Koyama scene was enjoyable to write, I whole heartedly admit. :)

I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it, it was a bit of a... hectic thing to write. XD

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budiamond September 13 2010, 09:29:42 UTC

Oh, thank you! :) I'm glad.
It's been a while since I've written fic where the whole group was involved and I guess I forgot how much I like it. XD

shiroikazex September 5 2010, 07:18:10 UTC

♥♥♥♥

i can't find words for this, really.

bananyphophany September 13 2010, 09:30:25 UTC

XD That's fine. Glad you enjoyed it, Saki~~~

carmine_pink September 5 2010, 13:22:04 UTC

&hearts Lovely. I liked the member ai and the stupid jokes and the past and future members working together to fix what went wrong. And OMG future KoyaShige I nearly cried for them too T___T Awesome fic!

budiamond September 13 2010, 09:31:51 UTC

Ehehe, NEWS really are fun to write together as a group. XD Pity I like romance so much I don't write much gen, hahahahaha. >>
Thank you very much! :D