fic for indian_monsoon

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Gift fic for: indian_monsoon
From: miss_jelly

Title: Just Keep Swimming
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Shige/Massu, Ryo
Warnings: mermaids?
Summary: It reminded him of the movie Free Willy, but he couldn't very well tell Ryo that he sometimes compared him to an orca.
Notes: I don't even know, I have a thing for changing my mind at the last second. Sorry to my beta for this, but

Comments

[bananyphophany]

This was so cute, and rather amusing. XD There were a few times I ended up giggling quietly to myself (everyone thinks I'm asleep >> Otherwise I'd have laughed louder).

I loved your sweetly clueless Massu and how Shige courting him worked a bit too well. XD

I have come away feeling warm and happy. Thank you♥

[miss_jelly]

:D thank you for reading, I'm so glad it made you warm and happy :)

[indian_monsoon]

THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE. I LOVE IT.

First of all, thank you for writing ShigeMassu - I was getting a little tired of RyoShige, but you had Ryo's character down PERFECT in this.

Fishing was calming, relaxing, gave him time to himself that he couldn't enjoy anywhere else- is what he told his mother when he'd taken to going out to the lake nearly three times a week.
This line was wonderful and cute. O that Shige.

“Merman, do you see any clam shells on my perfectly flat chest?”
Damn right, he ain't no stinkin mermaid.

Ryo didn't seem to mind, anyway, as long as Shige would come out regularly to feed him his mother's cooking- and to keep him company, but Ryo would never admit that out loud.
AWW RYO, THAT SOFTIE. He'd NEVER admit it, but he totally likes Shige as a friend.

“I like to swim,”
LOL trust Massu not to mince words.

Shige had begun to wonder just how much more obvious he would need to be in order for Massu
This was so cute, I can totally imagine Shige overthink everything he has done so far :D

“I have to go, but

[indian_monsoon]

OMG CHEY IT WAS YOUUUUU!! THANK YOU, THIS WAS LOVELY !

[miss_jelly]

:'D I'm so glad you liked it! I was worried XD It was so fun to write for you, though, and your review had me giddy for a while XD;; ♥♥♥

[fairy_illusions]

Ok so I have a Nishikato pairing bias, but THIS...I think I could totally live with RyoShige friendship too. Their dynamic is just too awesome hahaha

And I love how Shige totally won Massu over, but he didn't even know XD And Massu totally just went along with it thinking they were dating~ And Ryo making kissy faces in the background XD WINSOME.

Massu is still so adorable~ How can that beeeee????? XD

Oh, and the whole almost-feed-Ryo-tuna/prawn bit...I nearly died XD I think Shige would have gotten more than seaweed thrown at him if he did that~

I do love some good Shigemass~ :DDDD

[miss_jelly]

hahaha, my RyoShige bias battled me with this XD but I'm glad that the friendship turned out alright, in the end :D thank you for reading~

[beltenebra]

This was so adorable!

[miss_jelly]

:> love me some charming Massu, hahaha. glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much for reading :DD

[sanjihan]

This was freaking adorable. I laughed so hard through it and it was so sweet. And the END. Oblivious Massu isn't so oblivious but maybe a bit too laid-back for Shige's good. XD And Ryo was SO well-done. Just. Wonderful.

mostly because he'd only ever caught one thing and he was quite sure his mother wouldn't appreciate him ever bringing something with such horrible manners home with him.
*snorts* Oh god. Your humor. It's so dry and I love it.

noticing once he was close enough that Masuda was just as horribly good-looking as Ryo, he wondered if all of their kind were able to cause normal humans to suffer from sudden loss of self-esteem.
Ehehehehe. Poor Shige. Your life is so hard. XD

Ryo was less of the joyful flounder he remembered from a child's cartoon and more like those blow fish from the Discovery channel: sharp and possibly poisonous.
DYING. <3<3<3

“You're not swimming now, are you? Ah, don't face this way!” I can totally see this happening. XD The sarcasm, the horror (only not, because, well… Massu's hot

[miss_jelly]

thanks so much! I wasn't sure if I could do Ryo's snark justice, I'm glad you thought so :D dry humor. it's how I roll. :p thanks for reading!