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fic for nanyakanya

Aug 25, 2010 12:16

Gift Fic for: nanyakanya
From: sanjihan

Title: The Shoes that were Danced to Pieces
Rating: PG
Pairing: MassuShige friendship, Massu/Pi
Warnings: None
Summary: "Shige should leave the sleuthing to a professional." Or, "There's no kingdom and a bride waiting at the end of this mystery, but Shige thinks Massu's happiness is prize enough."
Notes: To nanyakanya. I tried to get ( Read more... )

c: yamapi, p: massu/yamapi, r: pg, c: massu, c: shige

Comments 11

beltenebra August 25 2010, 22:53:12 UTC

This is such a nice, sweet friendship fic. I really enjoy the development of the mystery and the view of Massu from Shige's perspective.

It was like magic. Watching Massu dance was like watching Massu swim, all fluid movement only intensified by the faster, locking movements that were like water hitting a rock, only impeded momentarily before flowing smoothly over it. Like this, this was so pretty. And apt.

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sanjihan September 12 2010, 20:29:44 UTC

Thank you.

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carmine_pink August 26 2010, 03:58:42 UTC

I really enjoyed this, the ShigeMassu friendship was so genuine and I can totally understand the way Shige felt being left out of something important in Massu's life. MassuPi was so sweet. And yes, Massu does dance like a dream :) Thanks!

sanjihan September 12 2010, 20:30:35 UTC

I seriously love ShigeMassu friendship so much so I'm glad it came across as genuine. :D I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

zheinpathos August 26 2010, 04:26:37 UTC

D'aaawwww This was really sweet! Shige is adorable and funny and so much fail and such a good friend! ♥

And Massu! OMG Massu is adorbs too! ♥

Lovely work!

sanjihan September 12 2010, 20:31:08 UTC

hehe. Shige loves Massu. <3 And Massu is SO freaking cute. :D Thank you!

fairy_illusions August 26 2010, 10:58:43 UTC

I have a major soft spot for ShigeMassu bffery and THIS really hit the spot~

Shige being a kicked puppy when he thinks his best friend is hiding something from him (and his whole sleuthing technique...totally characteristic of Shige; read as: fail, more fail and some success XD)

I love your characterization of Massu too~ Because it really seems like Massu's character to ponder over something like that (given his infamous indecisiveness in the event of shopping). And it's only natural to be so unsure of what to do over a matter so large.

I had initially thought the focus would be on MassuPi, but I actually think this is best~ A very lovely tale on friendship~ *cues: awwww SHIGEEEEE, MASSUUU~~* &hearts

sanjihan September 12 2010, 20:31:57 UTC

I know you do. ;) I'm really glad you liked it. :D I thought I'd take a turn writing some gen fic for once. XD Thanks!

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sanjihan September 12 2010, 20:34:28 UTC

I was SO excited to get you, and a bit daunted. XD I spent a while going through my copy of Grimm's Complete Fairy Tales until I finally decided on this one because I could see Massu in it. :D It was fun modernizing it in a realistic way rather than fantastic and I was a bit worried that you might not prefer that. I'm just so glad you liked it. <3 <3