Gift fic for arashijun

Sep 15, 2011 21:13

Gift fic for: arashijun
From: newsficcon

Title: Could Be Goodbye
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Shige/Ryo
Warnings: None
Summary: Shige condenses the truth from something equalling the length of a term paper to two words: “Nishikido’s missing.”
Notes: I hope you enjoy this, arashijun! The prompts were fun to work with. :)

Could Be Goodbye )

r: pg13, c: ryo, p: ryo/shige, c: shige

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arashijun September 15 2011, 21:38:40 UTC
So suspenseful. I love it. I don't remember what I even asked for but this was really good.
it was kind of subtle, imo, which is good :3 I like how you kind of need to read between the lines (forgive my total lack of response I'm half a asleep here)
The set up was good, gangs, come on that's pretty intense. Love intense.
Basically, I really enjoyed it, now I'm going to stop making a fool of myself, lol

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pinkpapyrus September 26 2011, 03:31:41 UTC
You're welcome!

Thank you for commenting!

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kaminikaku September 21 2011, 12:45:32 UTC
The atmosphere in this is great, loved the tension, loved the hints at how wrong things were that leaving was the only option. Loved the connection between Shige and Ryo, and the way Shige covered for him and then followed him. I kind of want to read more in this verse...

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pinkpapyrus September 26 2011, 03:32:16 UTC
Thank you for such thoughtful feedback. :) ♥

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