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changetje September 18 2011, 16:47:18 UTC
Firstly, sorry for being so late with reading/commenting! D: I couldn't find time to read it earlier, but I just finished it and I absolutely LOVE it. *_________*

kdsla;dk;lsakd;as this is such an awesome and amazing fic, Anon-san ♥ I love the whole Ocean's Eleven concept (because I really adore that movie, too) and all the character's backgrounds. Ryo really seems like an explosion guy and I loved that Jin was the 'disguise guy' (the sex thing with the bank girl made me laugh out loud, haha). Oh and Shige as the computer nerd! :3 I really liked how you described their ways to prepare and rob the actual bank. It was really nice to read. :D

Ooh and I also loved Ryo and Pi's relationship. Like how Ryo didn't want to be committed and how Pi actually had to almost die, before he could tell him he loved him ♥ The ending was very sweet, hee. Pi and Jin's relationship was also very nice and interesting. BBF for life! ♥

Thank you so much for writing this for me, Anon-san. It was great! :D ♥

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go_chan2011 September 25 2011, 03:25:49 UTC
Don´t worry! and so happy u like it! I feel little presure to write for u coz u r one of my fav authors and I really wanted u to like it so I´m really happy u found so many things interesting in my fic^_^

Thanks to you for reading, commenting and of course liking it, and also for inspiring this fic^_^

Thank you!^_^

*hugs*

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babyshazam September 19 2011, 15:54:36 UTC
I absolutely love this! <3 You made me cry though D: It's that beautiful and heartfelt (especially Yamapi's pain). I love the details like how everything started with Yamapi and Jin, Ryo and Shige joining, their bond, their brotherhood, their family. All that robbery mumbo-jumbo xD I was at the edge of my bed in the climax!! I love Ocean's Eleven and I can totally picture RyoShigePiN doing this :D I can't believe Jin and Shige watched RyoPi though xD Oh, also I was a bit curious with Ryo's past but with how things ended, I guess it doesn't matter anymore (and I can't fit it in either anyway xD)

This was really a good read! Thank you so much :) definitely one of my favorites ;)

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go_chan2011 September 25 2011, 03:28:15 UTC
Thank you!! It was hard to write this, but I´m happy you find it worth it^^ Ur comment made very happy^^ Yeah Ryo´s past wasn´t that important coz of the end hahahaha I feel proud because of your words^^ Thanks a lot for reading and commenting^_^

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lilly0 September 25 2011, 06:59:18 UTC
This is so good!!!!!!
The smut made me gasp over so much hotness <3 And then the confession <3
I didn't even know that you were writing Ryopi - it's a gorgeous story!
And I loved it that Shige bought a house in the end, or better: an island. It's simply amazing!
Thanks so much for sharing!!!!

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go_chan2011 September 25 2011, 23:06:01 UTC
Thank you!! Happy u like it^^
Hahaha I spent 2 days writting that! I wanted to describe it so perfectly that it took me more time than the rest of the fic!!
I have some RyoPi stories!!!! T_T Love them very much lately^^
Shige was a good friend ne^^
Thanks to you for reading and commenting my friend, I really apreciate it^_^

*hugs*

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fechan_news September 25 2011, 07:02:25 UTC
I LOVE IT!!!! (^O^)/

hohoho, sorry, at first i commented at the first page, i thought i'm the second one, but, fufufu, it's embarrassing after know that's one not the end page, LOL, so i change to leave comment at here.. :D

i love your RYOPI relationship, this is ones i like it :D, i love the chara and also the storyline.. (^^), eventhough the ratings is make me blushing hard (>//////<), OMG!!!

Pi always to be the Leader, and of course Ryo always support him :D
Jin always to be a funny friends, who also the bakaness :P, LOL
Shige always smart, i can imagine his perfect glasses.. haha XD

thanks for making this fic, please making more RYOPI ... m(_ _)m

*i'm happy, for my 1st PYO fic after my semi-hiatus,:3, I LOVE PYO (P+Ryo=PYO)*

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go_chan2011 September 25 2011, 23:09:20 UTC
Thank you!!!

Don´t worry, either way I´m just happy u took the time and commented on this^^

Hahaha thank you! I put so much effort in the plot! I wanted it to be really realistic so I worked on that^^ Sorry for making u blush! But that was hot ne!*wink*

I have some RyoPi fics^^ You can check my fic comm, In my master post I have some RyoPi^^ here: http://truthful-love4u.livejournal.com/tag/pairing%3Aryopi ^_^

Thanks for reading and commenting^_^

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go_chan2011 September 25 2011, 23:09:51 UTC
Thank you! Thanks for reading and commenting^_^

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