fic for imifumei

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Gift fic for: imifumei
From: crystallekil

Title: Work Out the Kinks
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: RyoShige, subliminal MassuShige
Warnings: ... porn. A bit of restraint. Nothing disturbing.
Summary: AU. Ryo thinks his roommate has a crush on his hunky personal trainer, but Shige hangs his heart at home.
Notes: I... really hope you like this, imifumei. My apologies for the summary

Comments

[arashijun]

Haha, amazing. Jealous Ryo is always a plus.

[imifumei]

A shadow blocked him from the hallway light, and Shige's first coherent thought was that someone so small shouldn't be able to loom so well. heh. Ryo-chan is just awesome that way.

"Mope," Ryo suggested, tilting his head like he was thinking hard about it. "Wear those stupid striped pants every day. Get on my case more than usual." heehee 'more than usual' aww. Snark a little harder, Ryo-chan, I don't think they heard you in Saitama.

"I'm not gay," Uh. . .Shige, baby, have you met you? Yeah? Want to reassess that one, honey?

Even if his employees didn't listen to him and he often came home with olives in his hair You'd have to know me to know why I am very tickled at the thought of Shige and Subway and olives altogether, which you might, I'm not sure, but suffice it to say, I'm quite tickled.

never mind that he was only twenty-eight YES! Nevermind it! Twenty-eight IS NOT OLD!

Masuda Takahisa was the worst nutritionist in Japan. Oh My God, YES! He'd be terrible! But sooooo cute. Plus it would be nice to have someone who told me it

[imifumei]

Oh, right! I also wanted to say. . .

I have read quite a number of trashy supermarket romance novels, so it's not as though I would find that a big turn off or anything. You needn't have worried. ^^

Plus, you really shouldn't apologize for punning around me. Unless it's really horrendous, but this wasn't at all. :D

[zheinpathos]

OOOH jealous, DoM Ryo, YUM :D

I love their bantering! I can't believe it took them this long to get together, despite living together for so long. But they're both stubborn XD I love this to PIECES ♥

And hot porn is hot. *___*d

[carmine_pink]

LOL Ryo, it's so obvious you want some from Shige, just go ahead and say so XD Hot, gorgeous, snarky but with feelings and with hot!trainer-Massu, just awesome. Thank you!

[sanjihan]

Fantastic. I love oblivious Ryo teasing Shige about his hot trainer. XD I loved all the little moments, the way Ryo steals Shige's bed and Shige can smell him on his sheets, the quick shots of snark, the UST. <3 The buildup was excellent and the realization satisfying. Not to mention hot. ;)

Also:
"No, not just..." Shige started, pausing as he got ahead of himself. "I mean, I do, obviously, but I also like... like you."

"We should definitely talk about that later," he whispered, "but for now I was actually asking if you wanted to fuck me."
THAT was the most fantastic moment ever. XD I laughed so hard, it was that perfect.

Thank you for sharing!