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fic for crystallekil

Sep 04, 2010 23:41

Gift fic for: crystallekil
From: myxstorie

Title: Movin' Out
Rating: PG
Pairing: Yamapi-centric, gen
Summary: 4 ways NEWS try to fix Yamapi's smile, and the thing that really does it.
Notes: I'm sorry it's not exactly what you asked for, crystallekil, but I hope you enjoy it all the same!

( Koyama likes to think that he was the first one to notice. )

c: koyama, c: yamapi, c: massu, c: shige, c: other, c: ryo, r: pg, c: tegoshi, p: none;genfic

Comments 4

cheekmunk0409 September 4 2010, 23:12:52 UTC

Awwwww! News is so sweet to their leader! Loved these guys and how you incorporated Pin at the end.

zheinpathos September 5 2010, 11:51:27 UTC

D'aww, so adorbs! <3
News member-ai + Pin + Akanishi troops = <3

Lovely work! :D

sanjihan September 5 2010, 17:57:55 UTC

Awwwww so adorable! I love how thoughtful everyone is, trying to cheer leader up (and I laughed at Tegoshi's and Ryo's way, though Koyama's and Massu's were my favorite -- so sweet.) The Pin at the end was just right. Thank you for such a nice, mood-lifting fic. :)

ryogrande September 5 2010, 21:07:11 UTC

OH MY GOD PIN YOU GAVE ME PIN IN A NEWS EXCHANGE, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ♥♥♥♥♥ i honestly didn't see it coming at all and then yamapi got emo at hip-hip and i was laughing while my heart ached at the same time.

and the rest of news (ALL OF THEM!!) working together to make leader smile again. tegoshi's cute attempt at the umai/oishii exchange, massu going through his stomach, KOYASHIGE BUTCHERING KARAOKE (oh god the thought of shige singing 'i will survive' makes me cringe xD), and obviously my favorite part RYOUCHIPI AT THE STRIP CLUB. of course uchi would turn his nose up at a naked girl and ryo would be like UNAPPRECIATIVE DOUCHEBAGS 8|. xD

THEN THEN. JIN. KUSANO. KUSANO WHO WON'T THROW OUT THE RATTY BEANBAG CHAIR. SHIROTA. YOU GAVE ME THE AKANISHI TROOPS. AND PIIIIIIIIIIIIIN ♥ IN A NEWS EXCHANGE. CRYING WITH IRONY. I LOVE IT. THANK YOU.

I FORGOT. BILLY JOEL LYRICS. NOTICED AND APPRECIATED. ♥