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[newra_skylarke]

Title: If you can’t beat them

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[nightrider101]

*snicker*

Very cute. :)

[mysteryimmortal]

lol. large puppy? what a description for ten. but you are right, the way you wrote it works for nine... good job

[nonlinear_lover]

The only thing I'd say is that the way Nine dealt with Jack had more light hearted innuendo to it.

<< Jack: Aww, sweet, look at these two. How come I never get any of that?
The Doctor: Buy me a drink first.
Jack: You're such hard work.
The Doctor: But worth it. [grins in an extremely self-satisfied way] >>

So while I can hear what you wrote in Nine's voice, the attitude strikes me as more Ten, with his view of Jack as an abomination in the eyes of Time.

[newra_skylarke]

it was cause ten is like a little kid all the time anyway, so there is no inner teenager to release! if you get my drift. the abomination in time thing does make sense. i forgot about that.... hmmmm..... never mind eh! and i just couldnt make the thing fit for ten..... my fics with ten are all mushy/smut filled things where ten manages to get round/over his issues......

hope you enjoyed it!

[nonlinear_lover]

Don't get me wrong, I love it.

And on second read, there's not nearly enough dialog for it to be Ten doing the talking. ^__^ So... maybe Nine in one of his less light hearted moods.