more RPS, dont read if you dont like

Jun 18, 2008 22:51


Title: Barrowman, I swear if you do that one more time…

Summary: sequel to “I’ll show you fucking intimidated” can stand-alone but makes more sense if you read that one first. David wishes he’d kept his big mouth shut.

Warning: Once again this is RPS; so don’t read if you don’t like it.

Rating: erm…. I think I will say NC-17 just to be on the safe ( Read more... )

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jadekirk June 18 2008, 22:18:29 UTC
Haha! Love it! This was a nice thing to read before I have to go to bed.

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petit_fox June 19 2008, 10:37:45 UTC
O______________O

You are... you are wonderful and I really fell in love with you ^___^
Thank you very much that you wrote this sequel! I can't believe you rly did this and answered my request <3

Tehehe, I don't mind that it's short. I had to laugh again... very hard. Those three girls are so evil but... I would act the same. Poor David in his little box! No wonder he had to shag John *rofl* I was very amused by the second part and it was also hot. Well done!

And poor Billie *dropdead* What a pity she couldn't watch longer because John noticed her *wink*

I will keep you in mind :D And btw... you should feel loved again. *points at my memories*

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mrssjw June 20 2008, 05:06:28 UTC
*guh* I SO wanted to be Billie just then! ^_^ As always, lovely piece of naughtiness, and I adored the commentary about make-up and wardrobe. Especially since you have to figure that with David and John they must have a field day trying to keep them "fighting fit" and heroic looking, even with David's penchant for playing with his hair. Brilliantly written, and I would love to see them "give in to the moment" inside the TARDIS.... you know, just in case you ever run out of plot bunnies! ^_^

Thanks for another great read!

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miss_academia June 21 2008, 07:16:51 UTC
"BARROWMAN, I SWEAR IF YOU DO THAT ONE MORE TIME!"

Hysterically funny. I can imagine this happening, no problem.

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silvermoon_06 August 23 2009, 20:06:59 UTC
Oh! Now this was an adorable little romp of a tale. Hot and sexy and a little bit saucy too. Hee hee. Poor David, giving John that little idea about the prop box. Hee hee. I enjoyed it just as much. My favourite line,

“I am going to fuck you into the floor of this trailer.” David replied, his eyes flashing as he kissed John forcefully.

Brilliant! Thank you again. :-) These two are definitely two of the most sexiest men on British television! :-)

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newra_skylarke August 27 2009, 09:42:05 UTC
it amussed me... for a little while. i liked the idea, so rolled with it. cheers for the comments!! comments are love!!

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