S-L Short: Anticipation at Dawn

Jan 26, 2014 19:38

Adam and Luke enjoy a father-son activity.

A/N: This is set in an open 'verse, which begins here.

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lanalucy January 27 2014, 00:54:45 UTC
This is so adorable. I always loved going to watch the planes with my dad, and Luke's excitement is just so contagious. :D

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newnumbertwo January 27 2014, 00:56:49 UTC
Thanks! Luke is such a fun character.

Thanks for reading. :D

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afrakaday January 27 2014, 02:36:33 UTC
Great use of the prompt, and I love how you ended it. Luke is too adorable and Adam is such a good dad! ♥

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newnumbertwo January 27 2014, 03:04:56 UTC
Thanks! Luke and Adam are fun together, and Adam just loves being a dad.

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fragrantwoods January 27 2014, 16:46:12 UTC
So sweet, and the whole family waiting is such a great image :-)

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newnumbertwo January 27 2014, 19:20:39 UTC
My sweet, loving family. ♥ The anticipation at the end wrote itself in. At first, I was gonna reward Luke for good grades, but he always gets good grades, and is motivated intrinsically, so that didn't really work. But dad and big brother time, yeah, I liked that.

Also, Luke is as excited as his parents.

Thanks for reading. :D

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