Fic: Learn to Fall

[wild_force71]

Title: Learn to Fall
Author: wild_force71
Characters/Pairing: Hatter/Alice
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Even in Wonderland, fairytales hadn't come true for a long time. Alice and Hatter face their Happy Ever After.
Warning: Brief, non-specific discussion of Hatter's time in the Truth Room, and Mad March's fate.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Sadly

Comments

[klcthebookworm]

That was strung together really nicely with the references to different fairy tales at their most macabre. And a couple of spots I was worried about them, but they ended up better than I had hoped. :)

“Was me or Charlie, and I didn’t think you’d like that much. Mind you, it took a while to talk him out of it.” -- Charlie and Carol at the hospital is an image that makes me giggle insanely.

[wild_force71]

Tha fairytale bits weren't part of the original idea, so I wasn't too sure where they were going at first! but they turned out very nicely, I think.

Charlie at the hospital would be fantastic, wouldn't it? Oh, I wish I was good enough to write that... :D

[wild_force71]

Tha fairytale bits weren't part of the original idea, so I wasn't too sure where they were going at first! but they turned out very nicely, I think.

Charlie at the hospital would be fantastic, wouldn't it? Oh, I wish I was good enough to write that... :D

[aspiringauthor2]

I really enjoyed this! Weaving together bits from fairy tales with Alice and Hatter's story line was quite brilliant. One of my favorite scenes was when Alice/Hatter discussed his scars--more emotional scenes make me more intrigued. And of course, Journey quote at the end? :) Brilliant.

[wild_force71]

Good old Journey. :D Inspired the whole fic.

I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm hoping to write more, but I'm really happy with this one for now.