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sar_kaz_m in new_wonderland

Fic: Doppelganger Effect (6 of ever-longer)

Feb 08, 2010 20:19

Title: Doppelganger Effect ( Read more... )

fanfic, pairing: alice/hatter, rating: pg-13, genre: crossover, genre: friendship, pairing: jack/duchess

Comments 8

limpycsiwombat February 9 2010, 01:34:42 UTC

YAY! An update...Alice needs to stop thinking dirty thoughts. Wanting more.

pirazz February 9 2010, 03:10:15 UTC

<3
andrew lee-potts sandwich.... I would DIE.

thewritingbug February 9 2010, 04:21:57 UTC

I've been quietly enjoying this story for a while now. I never did get a chance to see 'Primeval', but I like your writing a lot so I gave it a go. I love it. And now I really want to see 'Primeval'. ^^

tinmiss1939 February 9 2010, 17:30:33 UTC

DO IT! It's worth just for the Andrew Lee Pots, but the whole show it fantastic. Think of it as Jurassic Park done by Joss Whedon--clever, quirky characters run 'round being ridiculous at each other, and then DINOSAURS attack.

reni7681 February 9 2010, 14:08:04 UTC

damn ... I was thinking: do it Connor! DO IT! Say yes to Alice's idea ... *sigh*

I love it :D

tinmiss1939 February 9 2010, 17:27:21 UTC

Very interesting character developments, all around. Good show :D

There are so many details about Wonderland--the lack of a wine industry, debating wind power, fashion trends. They add a richness to the story.

Every time Hatter calls Connor 'little brother,' I think of Desmond on Lost calling everyone "brother" in that Scottish accent of his. It's a little funny, from here.

Also...despite the visual appeal of a Connor/Alice/Hatter, I'm a little glad that Connor blushed and wigged out. It makes much more sense for his character to be shy like that.

sar_kaz_m February 9 2010, 23:14:33 UTC

Thanks for your comments. I'm genuinely trying to advance my writing by getting more internal dialog, displaying more of the motivations & such.

Desmond on Lost - I forgot about him. I was thinking of Herger in 13th Warrior!

And I had to make Connor turn down Hatter & Alice: it's totally not his style. While I don't doubt he could get into kinky hijinks with Abby... I just don't think he'd do a threesome. That suggestion was kinda... fan-service, ha ha ha. ;-)