I just starting watching Primeval last week, but this is the fic I've been waiting for. I really hope Abby tries to befriend a Jabberwocky.
The writing is great. The character voices are very true, especially Connor. Favorite line? Right pull the other one, its got bells in it. The descriptions of walking through anomalies and the Mirror set a good atmosphere. I can really feel what it is like.
One request: Could you link all the chapters together as you write them? Some authors don't on this comm, and it can make it hard to re-read or follow the updates. I'd hate to miss part of this story!
I usually do try to link previous parts to the newest parts, mainly because we're a pretty high-traffic comm, and sometimes many posts will come in. The last chapter of my previous fic, "Hats Off", has all parts linked.
I love the little details about the anomaly, and the 3 steps bit was sheer brilliance. Connor being stuck on the "WHERE IS ABBY" bit is so IC that I squee'd a little. In fact, so far everyone seems to be parfait.
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The writing is great. The character voices are very true, especially Connor. Favorite line? Right pull the other one, its got bells in it. The descriptions of walking through anomalies and the Mirror set a good atmosphere. I can really feel what it is like.
One request: Could you link all the chapters together as you write them? Some authors don't on this comm, and it can make it hard to re-read or follow the updates. I'd hate to miss part of this story!
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I hadn't thought of that, but thanks, might be fun to write! LOL!
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Okay. I'll be back to give you something constructive (lauding and adoring) when I've finished reading.
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I love the little details about the anomaly, and the 3 steps bit was sheer brilliance. Connor being stuck on the "WHERE IS ABBY" bit is so IC that I squee'd a little. In fact, so far everyone seems to be parfait.
On to read more.
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