Chapter 14: Zell takes charge.

[chaosperfected]

Word count: 1487
Pairings: Zell and Xu, Irvine Selphie. Rinoa and Squall.
Summary: The attack continues to the garden, and Zell takes charge. Or tries.

Comments

[neo_rufus]

The fight scene with the Bomb monster made me smile. You described it just like in the game and as I was reading, I was picturing it so clearly. Cadet Anna sounds pretty cool. She reminds me so much of Xu, so precise and correct, lol.

Oh and I remember that zombie like state Rinoa was in. That was very scary moment for me. Feel sorry for Selphie in your story. I'm thinking Rinoa is going to pick a new knight. So eager to know happens next.

Great story...I love it so much. :D