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[chaosperfected]

Word Count: 2106
Pairings: Rinoa and Squall, Irvine and Selphie, Zell and Xu.
Summary: A crisis breaks out on the Garden, and things go from bad to worse. A positive ID, indicates that Rinoa having gone insane is attacking the Garden.

A group of SEED hopefuls gets seperated from the main corps, Jay along for the ride.

Comments

[neo_rufus]

Nice intro...I would have never thought of using the sorceress' theme to open a chapter. So Rinoa is going crazy, I feel so sorry for those guys. It's a good thing Zell kept Xu's safety in mind...I'm sure if Zell was there all by himself, he would have tried to talk some sense into Rinoa for a while.

Oh and I like how Jay got his scar. I must admit that I thought he was going to get it by Hayner, but I'm glad you thought of a whole different way of doing things.

This is a great chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

[chaosperfected]

haha, he probably would try to talk some sense into her. After all "she's one of us" as Zell once said during the game. XD

But considering the drastic change in her, I think his gut for survival kicked in.

^^