Chapter 7

May 30, 2006 02:53

Title: Chapter Seven: The Briefing ( Read more... )

squall, ff8, seifer, balamb, zell, selphie, final fantasy viii, final fantasy 8, edea

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ff7aeris May 31 2006, 04:30:08 UTC
ouch.... smack...

Wait, if Selphie is so short compaired to Squall... I have to assume that he is still sitting down, right?

Again, it seems to make sense to me that she would have a temper like that, and it is still constantly pushing the wrong buttons and Squall's harsh words only fuled the fire. Guess he deserves it.

I'm assuming that he is going to let it go instead of writing up like any other military organization that really frowns down on out bursts like that, right?

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chaosperfected May 31 2006, 04:41:22 UTC
No he was standing. XD
But a short girl smacking a tall guy *is* possible. He isn't that tall compared to Selphie.

Only about a bit. She's at least up to his chin/ear area.
So if she was really riled up, she'd be able to smack him no problem.

But I might revise it so he sits back down upon dismissing her. Shouldn't be too hard to revise. I had fun with this chapter. :D

The image of Selphie trying to crawl across XU's lap to get at Seifer is amusing. ^^;

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neo_rufus May 31 2006, 23:14:09 UTC
That water limit break sounds so cool. It reminds of of Katara from the Avatar. The trash talk between Seifer and Jay was so funny, lol. I really enjoyed this chapter. I just hope Seifer sees the error of his ways through Jay somehow. :)

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