Chapter 2 : What Happens In The Party -Part 2

[neo_rufus]

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“Don’t act as if you do not enjoy all of the attention Seifer,” a voice came from behind.

He turned around to face Quistis, who was wearing that trademark pinkish red dress. Her hair was still as blonde as ever, except that the two long strands were absent. Instead, they were hidden on the top of her head that formed into a bun

Comments

[summonerluna]

I finally got around to reading it!

I think I give you...♥ ♥ ♥ (don't know how to do stars...so I'm doing hearts). I like the characterizations--you haven't really changed the personalities from the game, which is one of my greatest pet peeves in fan fiction (meaning I hate it when writers do things like make Vincent as cheerful as Rikku or Selphie)--so yes, the characters personalities are believable, and they interact well. I'm curious to see what Cloud's role ends up as--normally I'm not a huge fan of crossovers, but I am a huge fan of Cloud so I look forward to seeing more of him :)

I'm a little curious to see where it is going...and though I think the way you have presented the characters makes it work, I do have to agree a little with what ff7aeris said in an earlier comment. I think it is very plausible that Seifer was, on a whole, forgiven--as upset as Selphie was, she is very optimistic and sees the best in people and I would not question her trusting that Seifer changed if he said he did--but I'm not sure if Garden would, from a

[neo_rufus]

I'm glad you got the chance to do so; I know you have been really busy, thanks. :)

Alright, ♥ ♥ ♥ are even better, lol. Yeah I did my very best to not tamper with the character’s personalities. To me, I feel as though I am in no position to do so. :P Don't worry, Cloud's presence in their time will be explained in a future chapter. It's quite interesting, though.

I agree, I shouldn't have made it look like they were worshiping Seifer or something like that. I just wanted to make a happy moment because as the story goes on, it gets a bit sad, and intense, so I wanted to start of off on a happy note. But I will keep your advice in mind; I think you are going to like it. :D

Chapter 3 will be up on Monday. ;)

[neo_rufus]

Oh and thank you so much for taking the time and read, it really means allot. It keeps me writing. :)