Steph's diary

[nevermore999]

I got to thinking- Steph wasn't using her diary in the first issue of Batgirl! She was using thought boxes like all the other squares! Then I couldn't resist...

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Comments

[mrsfrankenstien]

Clearly you should be writing the Batgirl series, your Steph-voice is totally spot-on here! Even if it is technically retelling stuff from the actual issue, the Diary-style narration is wonderful and perfectly Steph.

[stephsvoice]

When Cass told Steph that she thought The Spoiler hood was hung up for good, it came off sounding like they just ran into each other while patroling and not a pre-arranged outing.

Ah well, I didn't even think about the diary and that is a huge part of the Spoiler experience. Hope Miller has Steph mention that she outgrew it or something. At the very least a mention.

I agree with the first comment - you write a very convincing Steph.

[the_narration]

Not bad. I like how you tried to make the dialogue from the comic mesh with how the characters actually talk. And the amusing touch about how she's going to wash that costume first. Ballistic material doesn't breathe well. :-)

I wonder if Steph has decided to abandon diary-writing in-universe. Awful lot of ways for writing about her activities to rebound back on her....