Fanfiction: Lasting Patchjob (Transformers)

[neverminetohold]

Title: “Lasting Patchjob”
Status: Part 1 out of 5 (WIP)
Fandom: Transformers; Bayverse (with some G1 elements/charas)
Characters/Pairing: eventual Sideswipe/Prowl; Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Prowl, Ratchet
Word Count: 3056
Disclaimer: I would love to own Transformers, but that honor belongs to Hasbro and some others. But I own an action figure of TFA Prowl

Comments

[darksirocco]

eeeeeeeee! Primus, Never! this is gorgeous! Sides's angst is palpable and rending. and Prowl's uncertainty is perfect. everyone written wonderfully in character. wow, just WOW! love this!
cannot wait to read the next!
-Siro =^.^=

[neverminetohold]

Thanks so much, Siro! I'm so glad you think everyone was, so far, in character - I have to admit that I don't really know much about the twins... There's not much to see of them in Bayerse or the first G1 season, so I had to manage based on what I gleaned from others fanfiction's.

The next part should be up in... hm... maybe a month, the absolute latest ^-^ Like all my TF stuff, I don't abandon FFs, although they often may be on ice for longer periods of time.

[darksirocco]

you are more than welcome, Luv-the writing is excellent!
and yay! i'll be watching for it then!
(few things are more heart-breaking than reading a great story, and coming to, say...chapter 70, and realising it was last updated 4 yrs ago :( and the author themselves have utterly vanished, without a word)
muchmuch happy to know you'll be continuing!
keep it up!
-Siro =^.^=

[neverminetohold]

Yes, welcome to the club! That happens so often to me, that I really start to wonder whether I am cursed... But Ch. 70 that's esp. aweful *hugz*

[crimsonseastorm]

Oh this is just awesome! Well worth the wait I've had since you mentioned it :D

Sides reaction to losing Sunny is just heartbreaking and the whole follow-up realization is beautifully angsty. I love Prowl's hesitancy and uncertainty, but I like that he's trying just the same.

Wonderful start! I can't wait for more.

[neverminetohold]

Thank you, I'm glad I didn't disappoint after going and talking about it ^-^ I almost suspect that I need that kind of pleasure, to get into gear and sit down to write LOL

But, I have to admit: To me, as the writer, it's difficult to see/feel the reactions of the characters, so thank you for your feedback on that!

Next part up the latest in a month! ^-^

[lethal_femme09]

This is a really promising story.I hope that you keep up with it.

[neverminetohold]

Thanks! ^-^

I'm a great fandom-hopper, so, at the moment, nothing more is writtten for "Patchjob" but the two parts already posted. If you hate waiting for a looooonng time for updates, better stear clear of my WIPs. But I have every intention to finish this one or rather, all my WIPs!