therealljidol week 2, topic: "Um..."//"Blind rage"

May 27, 2013 20:33

NOTE, this is a bit intense. I started writing, not really knowing where I was going when I wrote the first draft of it. If any of the science in this is inaccurate, I apologize, I don't know much about it.....but even without it, I feel like I need to put the warning out there that it is a bit intense ( Read more... )

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neverletyoupart May 28 2013, 00:49:06 UTC
Thanks. :) I know it was and I hesitated before posting it but I decided to go for it...hopefully the right choice. :p

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cheshire23 May 28 2013, 23:49:15 UTC
What a question to answer! I'm not sure what's right.

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neverletyoupart May 28 2013, 23:58:45 UTC
I'm not sure what's right either... I think that's something only she could decide for herself...once the question was laid in front of her like that, she realized it wasn't as simple an answer as she thought.

Thank you so much for reading! <3

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jennickels May 29 2013, 02:37:45 UTC
Somehow I don't think that was the best time to grow a conscious.
I was really drawn into the story. I'm usually easily distracted when I read unless it's something that really hooks me and I read this straight through without even thinking of stopped or having my mind wander. Good job.

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neverletyoupart May 30 2013, 03:59:50 UTC
Wow, that means a lot to me! Thank you so much!

Would you be interested in writing this next weeks intersection with me? I really like your writing as well, and thought I'd at least try to grab you early. ;)1Totally up to you. Just askin'!

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jennickels May 30 2013, 04:07:03 UTC
I'd love to but I had already made arrangements at the end of the last intersection. Maybe next time.

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neverletyoupart May 30 2013, 04:10:41 UTC
Cool, no worries. :)

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myrna_bird May 29 2013, 13:28:07 UTC
This was compelling right to the end. I enjoyed it!

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neverletyoupart May 30 2013, 04:00:22 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it!

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whipchick May 29 2013, 16:30:52 UTC
What a suspenseful read!

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neverletyoupart May 30 2013, 04:00:47 UTC
I'm gonna take that as a compliment. ;D Haha! Thanks for reading. <3

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