fic: 'Simulacra' (3/10)

[neverfaraway]

Title: Simulacra (3/10)
Fandom: Rome (HBO/BBC)
Rating: R
Pairing: Brutus/Cicero, Brutus/Cassius
Words: c. 6,500 / 50, 000

Disclaimer: Rome property Bruno Heller / BBC / HBO, etc. Quoted passages used entirely without permission. No financial gain, etc.
A/N: HERE.

Prologue // 1: Good Omens // 2: On a Knife’s Edge // 3: The Die Is Cast

Comments

[mcicioni]

Beautifully, carefully written, the lines from the episode blending in seamlessly with your psychological developments. Am looking forward to reading the future chapters.

[neverfaraway]

Thank you, I'm glad you find the lines from the episodes work well within the context of the rest of the story. I was in two minds whether to skip over events portrayed in the episodes, but decided it would just lead to a disjointed narrative and whole scenes made up of references and illusions to things being said 'off stage'. I'm glad you're enjoying reading, and hopefully the next chapter will be up rather sooner than I managed with this one!

[lelegeia]

Brilliant once again! You do capture the characters of these men superbly and I agree that episode lines fitted in well.
Thanks for posting! =D

[elviaprose]

This is wonderful. I love the way you've built around the original dialogue and relationships in the show. It feels organic, and yet you've added so much! I do hope you'll write more.

P.S.

I love your Cassius SO MUCH.