Belonging: Chapter One (Prologue)

[never_more_fics]

Okay, so this is my new multi-chapter Fic... it's still a WIP and I'm slightly nervous about beginning to post it in case it dries up, ha ha, but it's going okay, and the longer I leave it, the more the ending of 'Journey's End' will slip from people's minds, and as this follows directly on from that, I'm reluctant to let that happen as it won't

Comments

[skullgirl013]

that was beautifully written i can almost feel the doctors pain *puppy dog eyes* more please!

[angely78]

*sobs*

you know, a lot of post JE fics seem to gloss over Proper Doctor's emotional state. Or they try and miss it. Watching the end of it for the millionth time I still can't believe he managed to walk away from everybody.

This... this was well done. Makes me want to snuggle him.

[anotherxworld]

Abso-bloody-lutely fantastic. I can't wait to read more.

[laurab1]

That's gorgeous :) Well done on the voices and characterisation.

Um, Italian pick:

"Me casa, su casa" should be "Mi casa, su casa". You were half right, though; the "i" in Italian sounds like the short "e" in English.

[never_more_fics]

Wah, I'd meant to check that, but forgot LOL!

Thank you, I've amended it :)

[dvanulya]

Beautifully done. Now write faster! LOL